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  • Poetry » Romantic, Horror Re: Mon Dernier Amour

    Hi there This is an amazing poem. The poem of a poor soul blinded by the beauty of his unfaithful yet exceedingly pretty wife. Though her history with men is ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Love worth Anything

    Hi there! It is an adorable poem. The point of poem seems the admission of 'I love you' despite all . When the measure of heart is seen in batting ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Life is what you make it

    Hi there! Nice style of writing. Th idea of life being what you make 'of' it is nice. Each assumption is properly compared. The beauty is in its simplicity I ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: When it was you, me, and the sea

    Hi there! is a beautiful poem completely expressing the colours of love and the shades of despair. The memories of happy times when all seemed glorious to the end when ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Are You Happy?

    Hi! Adreamer here. The idea of the poem is genuine and the genuineness seeps through the words. The feeling of hopelessness is created in a believable manner. If you are ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Please accept me.

    Hi there You have an amazing presentation style. Slowly beginning with the idea of hell. Then going on to tell the percieved reason for being different and finally showing hope ...

    Dec 15, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Death

    Hi there This is pretty amazing for a beginner. Your words highlight the fear of death while questioning what exactly are we afraid of. It is deep .Its as if ...

    Nov 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: colors

    Wow Amazing! Awesome presentation style. The use of colours is good. From the dispassionate matter of fact brown to the enticing purple to the mesmerizing pink to the lost blue ...

    Nov 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Romantic Re: Fidelity of Arachnids

    Hi there Splendid style of presentation. I absolutely loved it. The two friends who used to mean more then the web of lies that separates them yet holds them together. ...

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: A Gift

    Hi there You have an amazing style of presentation! I absolutely loved every single bit about it. The gift of life from Gods above that was given as a token ...

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: The Creature Changer

    Hi there Nice presentation style. The little evil scientist who ends up as a hamster just to be loved by the love of his life in the fury form! The ...

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Why won't it end?

    Hi there Nice presentation style.I absolutely loved the beginning. The way she is feeling is aptly described. A humane vampire ready to sacrifice herself lest she loses her true self ...

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: The Girl Who Broke Free

    Hi there Nice presentation style. Shadow who is never given a proper chance by the world of authorities and the popular kids was shown nicely. Her world of black and ...

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: I Am so Proud of You

    Hi there Congrats on the amazing story. The way it is written is unique. First stating the view of the narrator regarding the uneventful day then going on to the ...

    Nov 7, 2015


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