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Amazing work, honestly. What can I say except that you definitely captured the sunset in a bottle so we can all share it. I love how even the words you ...

This is great work. The rhythm is perfect, and your choice of words, though sparse, are just right for the message you are trying to convey. "Lock and key, Devil's ...

This is great! Your use of a turtle dove as symbolism for this long distance love is not only brilliant and beautiful, but also very sad in a way. You ...

Well, there's not much here to understand, so it's difficult to like it. It's not bad, but the writing isn't very descriptive or thought provoking, so, coupled with the shortness ...

Well...first off, the story is extremely, extremely hard to follow and boring because it's all just one massive paragraph. I lost my place five or six times and had to ...

Good work. I like the pace of the poem, and that it flows with the theme, sort of hurried and frazzled. Very true to live. My favorite lines are definitely ...

Great rendition of a short horror. You involve all of the objects and themes that I would associate with a graveyard, and it's great that it ends with the lover ...

The poem is good. I like that it's all consistent with the theme, and that it acts sort of like a story, explaining a little more as you read farther ...

This is sweet. A perfect representation of the heart of poetry. I like that it is short and sweet, but you use enough big words to keep it from being ...

This is great work! I was instantly drawn in and intrigued by your writing style, and the way you involved the reader, literally, by using "you" and "us," rather than ...

Well, I wouldn't really call it poetry. It's more like a poetically formed essay. Actually, it pretty much is an essay, but not a five hundred page boring one. The ...

To start, I haven't read any of the rest of the book, so I was in the dark about a few small details, but if I can open up to ...

First off, the writing is pretty good. It kept me interested, and there's enough dialogue and action mixed in with the Mirayah's thoughts and explanations to keep it moving. Unfortunately, ...

Wow, the way you break up the two separate thought strings is brilliant. Very, very good. It flows well and makes a lot of sense. Being the "romance" that it ...

I thought the story was interesting, but it's not extremely intriguing as you tend to explain everything outright, without letting the character's actions speak out. I felt so stupid I ...