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I would love to read all of this, honestly. I was interested throughout the first chapter, since the story is fairly good and the writing is good as well. But ...

This is nice. It's not anything over the top, but I don't think it needs to be. I like that you took the line, "so when the darkness comes down," ...

This is really great work. I can picture myself as a little kid, running through the grass trying to catch the butterflies. Your descriptive language is very good and definitely ...

Well, this is not really poetry. It's really long, and hence could almost fall into the ballad category, but it's not broken up at all. It comes out as more ...

I like, I like, I like. Literally. I love the little blips you put in about the dragon and the "girl's blade flashes," which gives it that classic fantasy feel ...

This is great! I love interesting and new things, and this is definitely new. Very original. I also love that you are exploring the view of an element of life ...

I thought this was nice and sweet, and fit well into the short story category. You express yourself well, and it's easy to understand that the main character is very ...

Well, this is very, very intriguing. First off, the writing style you used is very clever, half way to a poem, and your language is consistent and flows with it. ...

This is a very cool and interesting poem. I love that it opens up an idea that I haven't thought of, and that most other people haven't. The way you ...

Wow, this is very good. I love the concept, and the imagery you pain when you say, "and he shakes his gun at my heart. But his gun is filled ...

Very good! The subject matter is new that I haven't really heard before, but obviously true to life and lots of people can relate. I love that the poem itself ...

This is a well written poem. The subject matter is beautiful and interesting, though I would have liked to see some positives for the rose bud. If all of them ...

I thought this was pretty good. The story itself is very intriguing, and while I don't care much for Twilight, the vampire concept, while old, will never get old. Everyone ...

Well, this isn't to bad, but I have to be honest, it's not anything special yet. There are some positives to it, but also some negatives. First off, it's all ...

Lol, if you wrote this late at night, then you're good. I like the interesting concept about the girl, and how she reacts to the judgment the world passes on ...