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Re: Unpredictable
Hello, just leaving a quick review. For your first poem his is great. It's a beautiful piece and I absolutely love it. It's full of emotion and the ending literally ...
Mar 17, 2016 -
Re: You will never be trapped in past.
This is definitely a beautiful poem, it is full of emotion and can really hit home with some readers. It's one of the best emotional poems I have read in ...
Mar 13, 2016 -
Re: it's not very safe in wonderland
Hi there LadySpark I'm just dropping a quick review. I love this piece, plain and simple. I realize i have said this about other pieces before but this one is ...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: Elsa (Frozen) & Jack Frost Fanfiction Part 1
Hello there TheSilentBagpipe here to give a quick review! Although I am not a fan of Frozen I must say that this is beautiful, It has a great storyline and ...
May 28, 2015 -
Re: Regenerative Sphere
Hey there Fortis, I must say that I really like this piece and I also liked how you put a comma at the end of each line. Although since this ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Cogito
Hey there Audy. I liked this piece and I really think that you have a very strong talent for writing and with practice you can get even better. I also ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Lucifer
Hey there Castiel dropping off a review. I love this poem it's SUPERNATURAL! I love anything supernatural thus the reason for the name haha. So i must say that I ...
Nov 29, 2014 -
Re: The Teasing Horizon Chapter 1: Holding a Secret Breath
Hello Maybeileen I'm here to give you a review. I like this story it has a very nice tone and plot line and I must say that it really grabbed ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Crucify Me.
Hello again Collideascope here to give another review! I really liked this poem for a couple reasons. Reason one: it has a very dark and also very (pardon my fandom ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: Live, Love, Learn
Hello TiffanyToy I'm here to give you a review. I must say that I liked this piece. It has a very sad but also very true meaning to it. In ...
Nov 21, 2014 -
Re: A Line.
Hey there Collideascope dropping off a review! I liked this piece and i think it has a very nice touch of realism in it. I also like how simple but ...
Nov 20, 2014 -
Re: A Prayer
Okay first off wow, although a most definetly different type of poem it has a quality about it that makes it very real. Dogs and all animlas obvioulsy can not ...
Nov 20, 2014 -
Re: Unheard
Hey there musicandme, I really liked this poem and it has a great although sad tone to it. I also like how you separated each stanza. In conclusion I must ...
Nov 19, 2014 -
Re: Wallflower
Hey Firepower13, I have to say that for your first poem this is pretty good. And don't worry people on here really don't tend to be mean when you write ...
Nov 19, 2014 -
Re: Insensible
Hey there Vibe, here to give a quick review! I really like this piece but I like quite a few of the things you have wrote. There may be a ...
Nov 18, 2014