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Hi julia002, thank you for sharing your eggselent work - I'm here with an egg-inspired review for you today! The Shell: A Round Interpretation - Overall Thoughts Okay, wow, this ...

More Laughing Jack - oh no, I am ready to be freaked out! There should have been no reason for Alyssa Marie Stevins to love or even like Laughing Jack ...

Hi! Me again reviewing your short piece on this great review day! But she seemed to make the hallways of his own house longer and darker, making them twist in ...

Oh wow, that first paragraph really threw me right in the deep end! I love how you started it quite light (okay, I saw the name laughing Jack and I ...

This is a beautiful poem. It’s something I, too, feel and experience. I hope one day you will get to show this poem to the child you long for! Firstly, ...

Ooh, what an intriguing little prologue. I'm super excited to read the first chapter whenever you post it! It does a good job at setting up the story; we learn ...

Hi there! I'm here to review your lovely poem. I hope that's okay :) I really relate to this poem. The overall theme reflects the really agonising and solitary struggle ...

hi again ! I love a good diary entry, it's one of my favourite forms of getting to know characters. In Raisa's diary, we get a sad view of her ...

wow, i read this earlier when you first posted it and had to come back to it after processing it. this is a really beautiful poem, but i just especially ...

This is a nice, short, sweet little introduction to Asher and his family. It's a nice opening, where we learn about his name, his age, his friends, his sister and ...

The opening is really nice and succinct, really setting the tone. I think here, you could use a simile to describe Perdita's eyes, something cliche would be 'her green eyes ...

Hi again! Hope you're not sick of me yet XD Just a short review of your short piece! This is a great introduction and sets up some mystery as to ...

oh no, don't do this to me! I am such a huge Marble Hornets fan and Jay's death still haunts me to this day. I am so happy you're a ...

Your piece has a very striking and raw rhythm to it, with lots of visceral imagery of blood and sharpness. The sort of stream-of-consciousness writing style feels very authentic to ...

This is something i'm sure a lot of us can relate to, I certainly can. I love the structure of the piece, the back and forth between the narrator and ...