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Wow, that was a punch in the gut of a poem. This is something I can strongly connect to. I, too, feel sad when I look at old pictures of ...

Hello, the cover you have put on your work is clearly AI. I would change this, as it makes me think AI was probably used in the script too. I ...

Hi Creeper, I'm back again! I loved this short story. I could really picture the scenes as they progressed. It seemed to me, for some reason it would make a ...

Hi! Rev here to review your poem today and get it out of the green room as part of the after-watch! This poem is very interesting. You focus on one ...

Hi! I'm back to review the next to chapters of this amazing story. Let's get into it! These chapters are very different from the last two, but that's good! I ...

Hi! I saw chapters 3 & 4 in the green room but thought i would start at the beginning. I love this so far. The premise is so cool. I ...

This is one incredibly powerful piece of poetry. I read it once and then read it out loud to my partner, who agreed that it made an incredible impact. As ...

This is a beautifully written poem! The idea of the body as a sort of haunted house came to me in these particular lines: ribs creak like water-stained cherrywood stairs; ...

Hii! This is a really cool poem. I like how short and snappy the lines and stanzas are. It really trusts restraint instead of leaning into drama. The direct address ...

Hi! I'm excited to get back into this! First, I agree with Tikaya below that not much happens in this chapter, but I think it can work if you give ...

Hi! This is a very quick and brief chapter. I think the cover is AI-generated, and it would be great if you could change it! You can use the YWS ...

I'm so happy you posted another chapter! I'm excited, so let's get straight into it! I think the pacing here is really nice, and it feels like a more in-depth, ...

Hi velvet! This is a great poem. I think the structure of having just a few words, sometimes even only one, on a line and having it as a continuous ...

Hi! I am here to review your lovely story today :) The story here is very compelling and creates a lot of intrigue for me to keep reading! The narrator ...

Hi! I'm confused; this says Chapter Five, but I don't see a Chapter Four in the portfolio. Maybe you mislabelled it or missed one? Maybe I am missing something lol. ...