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I'm sat in class writing this review as I have nothing else to do. This was a great chapter and introduced a new character in a really nice way. It ...

Hey there! I really enjoyed this poem, and I think it really nicely captures a sense of seasonal depression mixed in with the thoughts of missing someone deeply. I particularly ...

Hey there! content From my understanding, this poem explores the struggles and hopes of a person trying to find meaning in life, while dealing with the hardships of addiction, loss, ...

the review He arrives like a phantom in a waistcoat and sunglasses, all pale skin and wolfish grin This opening paragraph, although it seems simple, is such a really great ...

Hi there! I'd actually been meaning to read your novel for a while now so I'm glad you requested. review. the opening: The idea of a vampire going to therapy ...

Hey there! I haven't read any other chapters of this story but since this chapter has been floating around in the green room for a while I thought I would ...

The first section of your poem, the a parody of the song "All I Want for Christmas Is You" by Mariah Carey, is humorous and clever in its use of ...

Yes another chapter! i'm really getting into this story! "Not you" Groaned Silver, annoyed. She glared at Sphinx so much that if eyeballs could speak, hers would be screaming. I ...

Wow, your work is truly one-of-a-kind! This is something so unique that I personally haven't seen before here on YWS! Your art style is super cute and adorable and the ...

Hey there! I saw that this was fanfiction but I'm not aware of what it is based of, so forgive me if I get any concepts wrong in context. This ...

Hi there! These don't really seem like a collection of short stories but rather one, long disjointed story. It would have been nice for it to all be one connected ...

Hey there! This is such a sweet short story! Positive elements: -The dialogue between Nova and Philippa is well written and captures a certain playfulness in the characters. -The description ...

Wow, what a unique way to present a poem! It did prove a little tricky to try and read all the phrases and lines but since it can be read ...

Hey again! I used to love creepypasta stories when I was younger so i was super excited when i saw mentions of Laughing Jack and Jason the Toymaker! Positive Elements: ...

Chapter Four begins with a very chaotic scene; the sudden announcement of a new contest to select a queen among the different dragon tribes. This causes a lot of confusion ...