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Hi! So I don't want to comment too much on the story, as I haven't read all of it, so I thought i'd focus more on some grammar and technical ...

I can’t believe my parents just agreed to inviting Nicole and her parents over. It just doesn’t seem right. Why would they do that? I agree with what Tikaya said ...

Oh wow, this is the first time I've seen you post such a long story! Well, it's still put into short chapters, but i do like how it is compiled ...

“Really? I feel like it’d be pretty boring.” Shirley said, looking at her phone. The movie had finished, so everyone was either on their phones or looking at something else. ...

The parents reactions here is honestly the real horror of the piece. A kid is missing and they take Nicole and send her to a friend's house. Do the parents ...

This might be the first time I've actually completed all the parts of one of your stories! Okay, so we are at the third and last part now, and I ...

Back again! I needed to find out what happened to Janice and Endora, so here I am There’s no way she’ll be able to run away. Not when I can ...

I love that this story has diary entries. I think it suits the character and the genre of the story very well. Raisa's voice comes across strong here, and it ...

Wait, am I actually starting a story at chapter one for once? It can't be! It’s a nice day outside! My Dads let me play outside for a bit so ...

I've been meaning to review this since I first read it a few days ago and could never find the right words to do it justice. This is clearly a ...

Hi! I haven't read the previous chapters yet, but believe me, I really want to after this! This is a lot more mature than the stories I have typically been ...

I literally clicked and read this one so fast when I saw a mention of aliens and sci-fi because you've written so much creepypasta and horror, I was excited to ...

Hi again! I'm super excited to read this so lets get into it. I gather this is a story about these kdis fighting evil monsters who have set up a ...

Hi [reviewer], thank you for sharing your eggselent work - I'm here with an egg-inspired review for you today! The Shell: A Round Interpretation - Overall Thoughts Okay another Marble ...

Hi creeperfeverdreams, thank you for sharing your eggselent work - I'm here with an egg-inspired review for you today! The Shell: A Round Interpretation - Overall Thoughts Okay, so again ...