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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Out of ammo Chapter 8. Awakening

    okay.., this is a long chapter, i've not read the previous ones, this is a challenge for me 😎 James approached his new vessel, taking in the sleek lines and ...

    Feb 20, 2025
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: l-o-v-e (guitar song)

    I L-O-V-E this song. I'm a songwriter/musician myself and I was just humming and singing this to try work out how it might go. In my head, it goes to ...

    Feb 20, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: Fabrication: Shikri - Day 5

    Okay so i've not read any of the previous chapter's but I really want to after reading this. It's not my usual go-to genre but I really enjoyed it. The ...

    Feb 20, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: How to End a War Before It Starts

    Hi, this is my first review in a long time, so i'm sorry if it's not super in depth! I love poetry and I have a big interest in politics ...

    Feb 20, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: of jasper eyes and clandestine meetings-

    why was i lowkey singing this in my head in the style of Lana Del Rey- like there is just something really lyrical about this poem. it's really tragically beautiful. ...

    Feb 21, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: I can't ever let go [does Aphrodite hate me?]

    Your poem explores complicated feelings towards someone the speaker cares for deeply but cannot express their feelings to. I thought it was a really well written and evocative piece. The ...

    Feb 21, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Early Morning Coffee

    Hey there! I really enjoyed this poem! It was a brief yet very evocative piece that explored the themes of depression and how it can affect a person in their ...

    Feb 20, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: you're beautiful when you're genuine

    hey there! I really loved this poem, It had a really nice conversational tone which made it easy to ready and flow really well. It was written in free verse ...

    Feb 20, 2023
  • Poetry » Horror, Literature Re: The Cause

    Hey there, this was a really impactful poem with upsetting tones but handled beautifully. I really hope this isn't something that happened to you, and i'm so sorry if it ...

    Feb 15, 2023
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: Call Of The Rebellion

    Your poem "Call Of The Rebellion" is powerful and speaks to the deep connection that people have to the land and nature, and the lengths they will go to protect ...

    Feb 15, 2023
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: The Devourer -- Horror Poem

    Your poem offers a powerful and evocative portrayal of the gradual and inevitable arrival of winter; the harsh and unforgiving season that consumes everything in its path. The poem is ...

    Feb 15, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Backround Music (Where I'm From Poem)

    Hey there! I loved this poem and I'm here to review it! The poem comes across as a heartfelt tribute to the role that classic rock music has played in ...

    Feb 15, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Doomed Land of Spes

    hello! Hi there, you can call me Green and I'm here to review your lovely story! I'll separate my review into different sections to make it easier to understand my ...

    Feb 15, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: The Jesters' Show (Chapter 2)

    The second chapter of the story explores the psychological toll of the pressure to entertain and the self-destructive thought patterns that can arise from it. Throughout the chapter, the protagonist, ...

    Feb 13, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Horror Re: The Jesters' Show

    Hey there! I saw chapter 2 in the green room but thought I'd read the beginning first of course! The story opens really nicely with a rhetorical question for the ...

    Feb 13, 2023


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