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  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'm Wearing Your T-Shirt

    Very nice work that you have here. It is obviously filled with a lot of emotion and the reader can sense that (I even started to tear up). I have ...

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Loneliness

    I love this poem so much. It made me sad but in a good way. Loneliness really is the worst feeling in the entire world. Some days I get really ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Diesel

    This is a really cool poem. It was short and it was awesome. I love the contrast between summer and winter when compared to diesel. It made me think because ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Old Films

    the language you use in this is extremely beautiful. It has so much imagery, it is really wonderful. I love how vivid the pictures created by your writing are. I ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: At what was to be. But cannot be.

    Really cool concept that you have here between the first and the second stanza. It was different and I thought it was intriguing. I really like the first stanza it ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Daggers, Hammers, and Memories

    I feel this was a very good poem. Sad but good. The structure was very good. I am going to give some constructive criticism even though I though it was ...

    Mar 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: The Hunt

    This is a very cool and thoughtful poem. It is obvious how much work was put into this and it was very intriguing. It had a really cool vibe to ...

    Feb 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Waiting

    I thought this was a very cool poem and I really like the creepy feeling that comes with a person waiting to be put in an asylum. I thought this ...

    Feb 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Contradictions of Life

    I very much liked this poem because it showed the reality of our society. I thought this was a very powerful poem that holds a lot of meaning. It is ...

    Feb 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Power Of Fear

    This was an extremely well done poem. It has a lot of meaning behind it and it was beautifully written. The rhyme scheme was wonderfully done and really made the ...

    Feb 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: The Note of Ink and Tears

    This was a very sad but lovely poem and it honestly made me tear up a bit. This was an extremely sweet poem that I believe really portrayed love. One ...

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fanfiction Re: Hayffie- After Mockingjay

    This was a very cool story about Effie. She was my favorite character in The Hunger Games and it made me happy to see something written about her. I very ...

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Pendulum of Fate

    This is a really cool concept for a story and I thought it was original. It was very fresh and interesting. I especially liked the comparison of a pendulum to ...

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Nobody

    That was a great poem and I very much enjoyed it. I especially liked it because I feel it is one of those poems that everyone can relate to at ...

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Don't Day Dream

    Wow. That is basically all I can say. That is probably one of the most powerful poems I have ever read. It was beautifully true and genuine. It may actually ...

    Feb 4, 2014


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