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Re: I'm Wearing Your T-Shirt
Very nice work that you have here. It is obviously filled with a lot of emotion and the reader can sense that (I even started to tear up). I have ...
Jul 10, 2014 -
Re: Loneliness
I love this poem so much. It made me sad but in a good way. Loneliness really is the worst feeling in the entire world. Some days I get really ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Diesel
This is a really cool poem. It was short and it was awesome. I love the contrast between summer and winter when compared to diesel. It made me think because ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Old Films
the language you use in this is extremely beautiful. It has so much imagery, it is really wonderful. I love how vivid the pictures created by your writing are. I ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: At what was to be. But cannot be.
Really cool concept that you have here between the first and the second stanza. It was different and I thought it was intriguing. I really like the first stanza it ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: Daggers, Hammers, and Memories
I feel this was a very good poem. Sad but good. The structure was very good. I am going to give some constructive criticism even though I though it was ...
Mar 13, 2014 -
Re: The Hunt
This is a very cool and thoughtful poem. It is obvious how much work was put into this and it was very intriguing. It had a really cool vibe to ...
Feb 8, 2014 -
Re: Waiting
I thought this was a very cool poem and I really like the creepy feeling that comes with a person waiting to be put in an asylum. I thought this ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Contradictions of Life
I very much liked this poem because it showed the reality of our society. I thought this was a very powerful poem that holds a lot of meaning. It is ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: The Power Of Fear
This was an extremely well done poem. It has a lot of meaning behind it and it was beautifully written. The rhyme scheme was wonderfully done and really made the ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: The Note of Ink and Tears
This was a very sad but lovely poem and it honestly made me tear up a bit. This was an extremely sweet poem that I believe really portrayed love. One ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Hayffie- After Mockingjay
This was a very cool story about Effie. She was my favorite character in The Hunger Games and it made me happy to see something written about her. I very ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Pendulum of Fate
This is a really cool concept for a story and I thought it was original. It was very fresh and interesting. I especially liked the comparison of a pendulum to ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Nobody
That was a great poem and I very much enjoyed it. I especially liked it because I feel it is one of those poems that everyone can relate to at ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Don't Day Dream
Wow. That is basically all I can say. That is probably one of the most powerful poems I have ever read. It was beautifully true and genuine. It may actually ...
Feb 4, 2014
