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Hi there! I must tell you I'm a grammar freak (and proud to be one) and those I's are just freaking me out! You should really capitalize them all! LOL ...

Oh... so depressingly sweet. :D Loved it! Didn't find any grammar errors just wanted to point out something: My feelings never disappeared, and now they can't just disappear. This kindda ...

Oh... how sad and depressing. loved it! :D As everyone seems that were rude enough to read but not to review, I will! :D Liked the repetition, it sounded well. ...

Loved this! It was great! You captivated the reader (at least me) and I'm hard to captivate. When I see a poem that has the same format every stanza and ...

LOL So if you were young, why didn't you reviewed it before post it now that you're older but not old (lol)? Anyway that's what I think. You have to ...

Hi there! You may think I'm stalking you, but I'm really not... So, now the review! Why do we fight ? Why cant we just get along ? Just because ...

Hey there! Nice work... On to the review! The first line it sounds a bit... well... boring. Don't take me wrong, it transmit the feeling, but to a normal person, ...

Hi there! Not many comments on this... just a few grammar mistakes: Moving on is hard to do but I've got to I wish you knew the pain you caused ...

O.O I liked this! It had a moral behind it and in the beginning it sound a little like little Red Riding Hood! :D Well, my way home is always ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! Yes you should indeed break it up. I'm sorry to say I couldn't read it all. I got so tired for only looking at the ...

Well, JFW1415 has pratically said everything. it's a bit short to have a good critique. I liked it. I liked how it seemed that it was the voice (narrator) was ...

Loved it! You (or the artistic character) were so sad about the betrayal. I could feel the emotions and it had a little bit of fun. Because the tables finally ...

don't know what to say.... I liked the theme and how it was like you were directly talking to someone.... But it kindda is something to just read and... well ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! You might not be very good right now, but you'll improve. LOL Anyway, I liked it. Good story line and description, but as Princess has ...

WOW O.O very deep... Love it! :D How depressing it is... I completely understand you! :D I didn't find any grammar mistakes. Some people might say that as you changed ...