Published November 30, 2008
"Do you really want me to critique this?
It's really really bad
The worst poem I ever read
I kind of wish I never had.
Your tone ... juvenile and arrogant
Your writing insincere
I'm still trying to work this out
Your meaning is unclear.
This "poem" is utterly lacking in depth
What is this? I mean, really?
It was a complete waste of time
Rewrite it, please, more clearly."
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
140,571 Literary Works • 673,487 Reviews
I love reflexive poetry! I've just got this idea for a new poem, If on a winter's night a poet... - recognise the title?
Punctuation could be improved in places but otherwise, well done on a cute, quirky piece.
Kudos and hugs,
Gahks
Haha... I liked this you definitely got your message across. Now I definitely know who not to ask when I want a critique. Just kidding!!
The rythem was good and I didn't really see anything you needed to change!
Keep up the good work, or bad work or... no no good work- I'M CONFUSED!
Completely changed my mind!
i absolutely loved this
don't know what to say.... I liked the theme and how it was like you were directly talking to someone.... But it kindda is something to just read and... well it's not very good. Sorry...
Keep writing!
lol.
Awesome, you wrote my review for me.
Prokaryote