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Hey Angel! As ever, I'm a huge fan of your poetry. Always the simplicity of it, with the detail and emotion. There is nothing I see wrong with this poem, ...

Hi Juni! I'm gonna jump all over this, alright? I think I shall nit pick first, if you don't mind. I rather miss nit picking >_> She walked down the ...

Hey darkangel! First off, I think I'll sound a bit harsh, but I'm only trying to help. My first impression of the poem was not a good one; I thought ...

Hello Kit! I'm afraid I don't have much to say! I quite enjoyed this poem, the flow was wonderful, and the description combined with the variable vocabulary was refreshing. I ...

Hello kimalane! Well, I found only two bigger issues with your poem, none directly related to grammar or anything like that. The first, I have to say, is that most ...

Hello mollycarraway! So, I rather liked your poem. The only thing that bothered my quite a bit throughout it was the rhythm - the way the poem is cut. It ...

Hey Angel! I'm glad to see your poems back up, I've always loved them. And with that, I can state I am not disappointed. I enjoyed this very much, it ...

Hey Pen! Quick review, not much to say. As Lily and Jabbs have said, the repetition is sort of annoying. And here we go again with mouths. I actually don't ...

Someone with an avatar that awesome deserves a review! xD Good evening! I'm gonna drop a quick review. So. I actually really like this. Not really sure I understood half ...

Hey rememberme! Surprisingly, I enjoyed this! I was expecting to see a rather cliché poem, you know, with all that romance stuff we've all read a thousand times. I'm not ...

Hey there Danielle! I'm Kat and I'll be giving you a quick review, okay? ;D Alright, so the biggest issue I found with this was how the ideas were tied ...

Hey Flit! Unfortunately, I have very little to say on this. This is for the single reason that, in my opinion, it seriously is a good poem. I love the ...

Hello! Honestly, this surprised me very much. I saw the title and I was ready to read something cliché and boring, but no! This was lovely, definitely. The flow was ...

Hey BlackDahilia! I'm Kat, and I'm going to do a quick review ;D Okay, so, first off, this is sort of short. Which is okay, you don't want to drag ...

*pokes Jon with poetry poking stick* Heeeey Jon! Kat's dropping by for a quick review, 'kay? So! Let's see what I've got on this. I liked very much, but that's ...