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@Liminality review delivered! Thanks for requesting one <3
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

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Hey can u pls review Mr. Quirk(Chapter 1) ? Looking forward to it.




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@ForeverYoung299 for sure! I'll get to that sometime this week c:
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@ForeverYoung299 sorry for the delay, but your review's been delivered! :)
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

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Hello, my friend recommended you. I would request you to review my article. this is my first time writing something.

Dhirubhai Ambani vs The Bear Cartel

Thank you.




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Brave and courageous @whatchamacallit of the kingdom of reviewers, it is I, @rida, a humble and honest reviewer in need of another fellow reviewer, for chaos has struck!
‘Tis about a work of mine, a poetry from my heart, that has been published recently.
The evil sorcerer of the kingdom of green room, has abducted my work! Fighting is useless, and I have thus, made a bargain….
My work, ‘tis lonely, and must receive two reviews. Two reviews and the sorcerer shall relieve my poem of captivity!
I, @rida of the kingdom of laziness, ask for your help in fulfilling the requirements!
Here I give the portal to the work,
We are [curios about it? Well then, click this!!!!!!!]
If, by my luck, shall you accept it, then I wish you a better luck than anyone else’s.
Goodbye, courageous and amazing reviewer
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@roshi @rida I'm so sorry for the delay! I've been really busy recently -- but I promise I'll get to both of your reviews sometime in the next couple of weeks. Thank you for being patient ^^
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Hey! I don't know if you are still up for reviewing, but I would be really grateful if you could review my novella The Old Man And The Boy. It contains 8 short parts and an epilogue. It is a story about a boy's growth and development and it takes place mostly through short simple conversations. Don't know if that's the sort of thing that interests you, but I would really love to have your feedback.

Here's the link for the first part:

The Old Man And The Boy 1

If you are interested then I will send the rest of the links as well, or you can just find it there.

Let me know!
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@RandomTalks I can certainly review all those parts over the course of RevMo!

(Also @rida I just wanted to let you know I haven't forgotten about your two poems, and they will definitely get a review from me at some point during RevMo as well! <3)
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Hello, brokenHeartsAri here to drop off a poem!!

Bright Lights
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~

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Hi!

Any chance you could review part 1 & 2 of chapter 6?

Fool Without A Master (Chapter 6 Part 1)




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Hi! I would love a review on this total overall of re-writing, please.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=153043

It's rated Everyone. Thank you!
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Hey there, Hijinks! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

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