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Hijinks · 2020-04-13T20:25:00Z

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/images/uploads/4e1287.png Welcome to my reviewing thread! If you're looking for an in-depth review that is full of constructive criticism, you've come to the right place. What I will review Poems Short stories Essays Art First chapters Middle chapters (however I will probably not read the previous chapters) Scripts (I don't have as much experience reviewing these but I'm willing to give it a shot!) Most content, including gore, violence, and language All genres What I will NOT review Anything containing sex Anything containing hateful content towards groups of people based on their lifestyle or beliefs Anything with more than 4 good reviews What my reviews are like Poetry I'm definitely the most comfortable reviewing poetry, and you'll probably get a pretty in-depth review from me! I'll talk about structure, stylistic choices (such as punctuation and capitalization), flow, and wording. Examples: time does not heal all wounds hot cicada summer Frittering away Spring in a Narrow Gorge Short stories If I review your short story I'll touch on plot, characters, and grammar. Examples: Unbiased Essays and articles These are my most nit-picky reviews - I like to focus on grammar, vocabulary/wording, and the arguments/points. Examples: My Essay on the Rise and Fall of Postwar Independent America Car Companies and Comparing Them To Tesla Adapting to Change Only Needed- Horse Show Checklist Art Second only to poetry, art is my favourite thing to review! I'll talk about colour pallet, composition, realism (if that's applicable), and shading. Examples: Paralyzed Collective - A Series of Art I Don???t Remember Doing Ear Ring - A Visual Pun Chapters When reviewing a chapter, I like to talk about plot, characters, dialogue, and descriptions (and sometimes grammar nit-picks as well). Examples: Corrupted Courage Chapter 7 Chapter 7 Scripts Scripts are mostly dialogue, so my review will mainly focus on that - as well as characters and plot, of course! Examples: Hide & Seek (part 1) Longing How long do I take to review? I will aim to review your work within a month of the request. Requesting a review Comment with a link, and anything you'd like me to know about the piece - if there's anything specific you'd like feedback on, mention that too! Zero payment needed - my reviews are completely free! PS: if I'm uncomfortable reviewing your work for whatever reason, I can decline to review it :)

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Sat May 16, 2020 3:03 pm

Hijinks says... · Sat May 16, 2020 3:03 pm

@Blackho your review is done!

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Mon May 18, 2020 8:45 pm

Hijinks says... · Mon May 18, 2020 8:45 pm

All caught up on reviews - @Liberty your review is finished!

When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

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Mon May 18, 2020 8:58 pm

Lib says... · Mon May 18, 2020 8:58 pm

Thanks!!

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Sun May 31, 2020 3:07 pm

Shadeflame says... · Sun May 31, 2020 3:07 pm

Hi Watcha!

I was wondering if you would review a chapter of Slave Girl for me.
Here's the link!
Slave Girl: Chapter 2.1

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Sun May 31, 2020 4:21 pm

Hijinks says... · Sun May 31, 2020 4:21 pm

@Shadeflame thanks for the request! Your review is finished!

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Sun May 31, 2020 4:49 pm

looseleaf says... · Sun May 31, 2020 4:49 pm

Hey whatcha! You don't have to review this, but I would like another review on it. It is not in the greenroom and is pretty long, so don't feel obligated to do it.
My Essay on the Rise and Fall of Postwar Independent American Car Companies and Comparing Them To Tesla

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Mon Jun 01, 2020 5:42 pm

Hijinks says... · Mon Jun 01, 2020 5:42 pm

@LZPianoGirl your review is done! I love reading your essays, they're always very interesting!

When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

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Mon Jun 01, 2020 5:42 pm

looseleaf says... · Mon Jun 01, 2020 5:42 pm

Thank you! I appreciate it! <3

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Mon Jun 08, 2020 1:23 pm

kaitlyn says... · Mon Jun 08, 2020 1:23 pm

Hey, Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night (whatever it is when you see this),

I'd love it if you could review the first chapter of my novel, Its got 3 reviews at the moment so I don't know if it'll get a fourth when you see it but I hope you review it.

I'd love an in depth review and don't worry about being harsh. I come from the Underworld, I'm sure I've heard far worse.

So here it is:

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 1

Hope you like it!

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Mon Jun 08, 2020 6:36 pm

Hijinks says... · Mon Jun 08, 2020 6:36 pm

@HarryHardy thank you for the review request! I've finished your review - the chapter was very fun to read!

When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

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Tue Jun 09, 2020 5:05 am

kaitlyn says... · Tue Jun 09, 2020 5:05 am

Your welcome and thank you for taking the time to review. Glad you like it

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Fri Jun 12, 2020 5:06 pm

kaitlyn says... · Fri Jun 12, 2020 5:06 pm

Hi, Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night, (whichever it is in your part of the world),

I'm back. Could you take a look at the second chapter of my novel?

Here it is : The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 2

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Sat Jun 13, 2020 8:16 pm

Hijinks says... · Sat Jun 13, 2020 8:16 pm

@HarryHardy Definitely! I'll make sure to review it by the end of the week!

When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green