Hey, Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night (whatever it is when you see this),
I'd love it if you could review the first chapter of my novel, Its got 3 reviews at the moment so I don't know if it'll get a fourth when you see it but I hope you review it.
I'd love an in depth review and don't worry about being harsh. I come from the Underworld, I'm sure I've heard far worse.
"Storybooks and roleplays are just for fun!" To which I say: of course! But why only "just"? Sometimes fun is found in the full-send. Sometimes fun is found in taking it seriously, and aiming to do it with excellence! — soundofmind