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Heyy Loonz!!

Could you take a look at these two short stories?

A Day Off Part 1

A Day Off Part 2
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Hey! I need help getting my last two chapters of my novel out of the green room. Can ya help me out? The Rage (Chapter 7)

If you have the time to read the novel from the beginning, that would be awesome! But if not, the last 2 chapters is fine :)




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@HarryHardy @MissGangamash sorry for the incredible delay! I'm able to review your requested pieces now if you'd still like those reviews - but if you've gotten all the reviews you need at this point that's fine too. Just let me know if you still want me to review those works and I'll drop by sometime this week <3
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It doesn’t matter now, I’ve just uploaded chapter 24 😂




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@MissGangamash haha alright! If you'd like a review on any of the later chapters, instead, just let me know :)
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I'd still love a review!
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@HarryHardy yay! I'll get to those sometime in the next week ^^
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The Rage (Chapter 24) and onwards are still in the Green Room so if you have time, I'd love you to review them :)




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Hi! raindrops here.

I am new here in YWS and looking for reviews that are constructive and actually criticizes my work, so I hope you have time for these first few chapters of the novel I am working on. Thanks in advance.

Entropy - Chapter One
Entropy - Chapter Two
Entopy - Chapter Three




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Just going to bump this thread ~ still taking review requests!
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Hey whatcha! I hope you're still taking requests because I have a chapter that needs reviewing. :) It's chapter two of my series, so it's not far enough in that I think you'll be completely lost.





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@looseleaf I sure am! I'll get to that sometime this week ^^
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@looseleaf review completed! c:
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Hiya whatcha! Wondering if you could help get my poem Floodgates with missing keys out of the Green Room please c:
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@Liminality someone beat me to getting it out of the green room, but I'd love to leave you a review! I'll get you one by this weekend ^^
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