Well, I'm here to request another review. It's an entry for a contest, and I'd like to have some criticism on the following aspects:
1. The word count for the contest is 1500, and this story for now is almost 1900 words. So I'd like to know which parts in the story could be shorter.
2. The theme of the contest is: 'We will never stop fighting for this planet' - Greta Thunberg. How can young people make change happen? I'd like to know if the story is able to represent this theme well enough.
3. It'll be really helpful for me if you mention how it will do in this contest, what my chances are at winning, etc.
Hello @whatchamacallit! Can you please review my poem Frittering away. I have seen your reviews to be very detailed and helpful. I will love to know how I can improve.
Uh hi, I saw in the forums that you were doing reviews and I was wondering if I might be able to make a request?
It’s for my short story ‘Supernova’ that I published a while ago and though it has already received about 3 reviews I was wondering if I’d be able to get some more constructive criticism on it since I’d like to perhaps publish it professionally one day. Is that alright?
It’s cool if you don’t have the time but here’s the link if your free Supernova
“And how shall I think of you?' He considered a moment and then laughed. 'Think of me with my nose in a book!” — Susanna Clarke, Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell
