Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, In those days, or nights ...

Hi HeVan! Welcome to YWS, I hope you're enjoying the site so far. I have mixed feelings about prologues to stories as for a while they seemed like they were ...

Under the broken stars, I breathe in One more burst of light. Colors whirl like apocalyptic galaxies, hurling shards from across the night. I closed my eyes and saw dulled ...

Hi, I'm here to leave a review. My heart was pounding so loudly and irregularly, I thought it would jump out of my chest and fall to the ground, bound ...

Review Spotlight for January 2023 Top 5 Reviews: Re: What a Girlfriend Is (or Serena’s Slice-of-life in Space) by @Mika Honeydew Re: who will i become when your dahlias and ...

Hi again, still not completely sure how to do this but here are a few things I noticed while reading. The first big thing was a grammar error in the ...

might i refer to this post again. i absolute adore all of the writers and their literary works in this spotlight, among every contribution to this site. all of you ...

Life is not but flesh on bone convulsing above the ground!

revised but still really really mediocre

a poem I wrote when I was feeling very low

Hello here to leave another review... I am impressed you took this inspiration from Wings of Fire (I have done that myself) and I am a great fan of the ...

Hey, I’m just jumping into this thread so I’m not sure if this is too similar to what others have said, but here’s my idea: Instead of each chapter being ...

Perched on highest branch Y’know, the branch overhead With the nest on it

Escaping Mother's anger, flying from the reality that stays on the ground.

Love it! I love how you clarify that it is a dream but it feels more like a nightmare. I enjoyed the format, as well. It defies regularity, just as ...

I love this so much!! It is really unique and I love the educational but lingering feeling that this invokes. My only suggestion would be to maybe space the segments ...