Young Writers Society

Hello Hello, I hope you dont mind me poping with a quick ( really short and not as in-depth as my usual ones) review. I do enjoy the general themes ...

I have so many photos I want to post but I can only edit potatoes onto my face so fast so little time!

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary “This complicates things, though. You see, I need a Champion. Someone who is willing to put their life before others. Someone who is willing to ...

A mortician reflects on life as he prepares to burry everyone he loves

Hello, my fellow writing friend! A Little Skimming - First Impressions This is a very touching poem. I love your points on moving on, and moving forward. Not dwelling on ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary It hit her that her father has to be what—or in his case, who—she was afraid of most. She was frightened by just him, because ...

"Your skull is thicker and hotter than this planet's mantle. And you're not even a guy. What you're going to do, is take this backpack full of rocks and carry ...

time passing and driving an '87 mercedes

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Jase grabbed Josephine by the wrist and led both girls into the trees, the smell of sulfur engulfing them as if they were in an ...

The truth behind who everyone assumes is a bright warm fire. But is instead a shadowy serpent.

hey there, I'm just dropping by for a quick review : ) First off, I really liked this story. I thought it was endearing and I thought that the interactions ...

Kita doesn't know how to react...

I am going through a similar situationship right now. “'You never listen.' You said. 'I do…you’re the one who never listens…..'" This line makes me feel not alone. It really ...

Sasha Merlot Collabed with @Spearmint Sasha skirted her way between two rooftop gardens, trying her best not to trample the vegetables as she swiftly made her way to the edge ...

This poem really explores the human nature and how love can be easilly chnged to obsession. It is a dangerous line that one must walk, and have to be careful. ...

This work is top notch! I love the mix of dreams and reality. It shows that love is as much a dream as it is a reality! You have to ...