Young Writers Society

Hey friend, wow I have loved seeing all of your poetry around the site! I sure love the interesting concepts, messages, and formats that you use. This poem reminded me ...

Hello, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review your new short story using my Familiar method today! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh heh… What The ...

I love the idea of throwing Dark Fae in there! And yeah, I think Wendigo might fit better into the second category as well

“If the beak turns east, I go home. If it stays west, then I…”

Rose makes the Mark, but something's different

Hi! I am here with a short review of this work. The first thing to consider is the length - it's a bit short, but I don't mind it at ...

Hello! This poem is very very good. It is also very relatable. In the begging of the poem you say "A unhealed child Who walks aimlessly through life No guide ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Verena and James get sent to the past, ...

Hello! I love this poem. I recently posted a poem about a boy i like but didn't know if he likes me. I love how in this poem you show ...

For the boy I've fallen for longer than I have the others.

Hi! First of all, I really like that the entire poem has perfect rhymes. The overall poem gave me the feeling of satisfaction and carefreeness. You’ve used the aspects of ...

I’m melting where I live so I wrote about that

#30 The Hook Poetic Style - 4 - Refrain Inspiration - 4 - Song Lyric Coin Flip - Tails - Incorporate Into Poem Lyric: "And I asked every book" I ...

3, 4 Come and lean against my side, kiss the creases on my hand. This love is how we be brave; the solid rock on which we stand. Come and ...

these are the kinds of poems that make you read it the second, third, fourth, and fifth time, because even if there's less than 10 lines, there seems to be ...

Alright, it's been a while and this work has been sitting in the green room for some while, no? Let's free it from the shackles of jade and let it ...