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Marina’s Dad (from my story “Marina and the hat”):

Heyyyy, this is Coffee and maybe you should grab a nice beverage as you sit down to check this site and catch up on stuff! Now, onto the review! Overall, ...

A straw hat kills Marina, but how? It’s just a boring, ugly straw hat. What could possibly make it kill someone?

Hey friend, wow I have loved seeing all of your poetry around the site! I sure love the interesting concepts, messages, and formats that you use. This poem reminded me ...

Hello, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review your new short story using my Familiar method today! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh heh… What The ...

I love the idea of throwing Dark Fae in there! And yeah, I think Wendigo might fit better into the second category as well

“If the beak turns east, I go home. If it stays west, then I…”

Rose makes the Mark, but something's different

Hi! I am here with a short review of this work. The first thing to consider is the length - it's a bit short, but I don't mind it at ...

Hello! This poem is very very good. It is also very relatable. In the begging of the poem you say "A unhealed child Who walks aimlessly through life No guide ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Verena and James get sent to the past, ...

Hello! I love this poem. I recently posted a poem about a boy i like but didn't know if he likes me. I love how in this poem you show ...

For the boy I've fallen for longer than I have the others.

Hi! First of all, I really like that the entire poem has perfect rhymes. The overall poem gave me the feeling of satisfaction and carefreeness. You’ve used the aspects of ...

I’m melting where I live so I wrote about that