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Hi! I am here with a short review of this work. The first thing to consider is the length - it's a bit short, but I don't mind it at ...

Hello! This poem is very very good. It is also very relatable. In the begging of the poem you say "A unhealed child Who walks aimlessly through life No guide ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Verena and James get sent to the past, ...

Hello! I love this poem. I recently posted a poem about a boy i like but didn't know if he likes me. I love how in this poem you show ...

For the boy I've fallen for longer than I have the others.

Hi! First of all, I really like that the entire poem has perfect rhymes. The overall poem gave me the feeling of satisfaction and carefreeness. You’ve used the aspects of ...

I’m melting where I live so I wrote about that

#30 The Hook Poetic Style - 4 - Refrain Inspiration - 4 - Song Lyric Coin Flip - Tails - Incorporate Into Poem Lyric: "And I asked every book" I ...

3, 4 Come and lean against my side, kiss the creases on my hand. This love is how we be brave; the solid rock on which we stand. Come and ...

these are the kinds of poems that make you read it the second, third, fourth, and fifth time, because even if there's less than 10 lines, there seems to be ...

Alright, it's been a while and this work has been sitting in the green room for some while, no? Let's free it from the shackles of jade and let it ...

It's been a while since I wrote a review so forgive me if this is not the most comprehensive kind. I would just like to provide some insight and encouragement ...

Florian wrinkled his nose in disgust at the godawful stench. "Good lord, take a bath my friend. We can't have you making first impressions looking, and smelling, like that! Now ...

Oh, that would make sense!! That could city could also be the place where the flying ships dock and land. It'd be much easier for them to alright be up ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well this was quite the little tale, and ...

Hello hello, I hope you dont mind me popping in with a quick review. Thank you for letting me know you posted a longer version sorry for not reading it ...