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Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : This was quite a powerful little piece here. ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : This is another beautiful tale. I think you've ...

Ellette wanders off from her family and goes right into a dark cave, ignoring everything she’s ever learned from media. She’ll be fine! ^v^

Thank you for sharing this amazing work. I feel that the line "I wonder, when I die, would you even cry?" is something that I really relate to. I often ...

Hello! I hope you are well. I'll go right into the review. First things first, I loved how the entire poem is so perfect, and the flow is smooth. I ...

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Part one of a story about Age.

Hello Again, My Friend! It's been some time, but I'm excited for this chapter! Anyway, it's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story ...

Love love loveeeee the first part describing the car - i've never thought about it like driving a car but it fits so well. so many great metaphors and analogies ...

gorgeous word library without sounding like you took everything from a thesaurus - i like how the story fluctuates like the narrator is just speaking to someone without making it ...

my first real short story, about two disturbed orphans who do stuff :3

A poem about grappling with the grief of losing a loved one. This poem inspired a novel that I have began (see my portfolio).

I hope you don't mind leaving a review! I really love this work. "If my voice could cry out. If the vast nothingness didn't steal the words from my tongue. ...

Hi, I'm here to leave a quick review. Let me preface this by saying that I absolutely love this. It feels authentic and beautiful; a realistic expression of love. The ...

I loveeee this! I hope you don't mind me leaving a quick review! I absolutely see deep admiration in this writing. Your descriptive words elicit feelings of purity, youth, and ...