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MORE!Sat Aug 11, 2007 4:05 pm -

Corazon Anders walked down the street with a frown on her face. She was going to meet a friend for …Mon Aug 06, 2007 4:06 am -

Survival and AdvintureFri Aug 03, 2007 7:38 pm -

First ChapterFri Aug 03, 2007 3:56 pm -

Just the begining.( all crits , welcome)Tue Jul 31, 2007 9:34 pm -

Rain was coming down hard that night. The streets were flooded and almost everyone was in their hom…Sat Jul 28, 2007 5:36 am -

Very short first chapter, yes I know, but it's just an intro. The next will be longer. Read, crit, …Tue Jul 24, 2007 3:30 am -

This is the beginning of the story, but the main story doesn't take place until 15 years later, but…Mon Jul 23, 2007 1:28 am -

Here is the 3rd chapter of my book please comment PLEASE :cry: Chapter 3 The Rescue “It’s been a wh…Wed Jul 18, 2007 3:02 pm -

here is chapter two edited hope you like it Chapter 2 The Meeting When Rone woke up he couldn’t rem…Wed Jul 18, 2007 2:48 pm -

This is my first chapter that i have edited please comment :!: :D Chapter 1 The Invasion On a heavi…Wed Jul 18, 2007 2:38 pm -

All in all I say it is very good. The synphoney part is interesting and is a good and original way …Sun Jul 15, 2007 11:03 pm -

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Very nice! :D Although it was a bit confusing at times (sorry :( ), that didn't keep me from liking…Sun Jul 15, 2007 6:19 pm -

GUARDIAN OF HEAVEN By: Greg Pierce/YoshiArmada/Bob CHAPTER 1 in the deep night a man is seen walkin…Sun Jul 15, 2007 5:43 pm -

Prologue ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------…Sun Jul 15, 2007 5:37 pm -

A western story--completed!Fri Jul 13, 2007 2:22 am -

This is just the basic beginnings of an action story i am working on. I hope you enjoy and all crit…Mon Jul 09, 2007 12:52 am -

Well, here it is! My first story. I hope you like it! Oh, and as for the names of the characters? L…Sat Jun 23, 2007 5:00 am -

PrologueThu Jun 14, 2007 8:52 pm -

Third Tale of the Dark KensaiThu Jun 14, 2007 6:30 am -

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When Simon got home he noticed something was wrong. The front door was unlocked and the house was o…Fri Jun 08, 2007 2:17 am -

Chapters 1-8 *mild language and sexual tension*Wed May 30, 2007 1:40 am -

Here we are, in your own Naruto world. (Really, its mine) You are joining team 7 in the ninja acade…Thu May 24, 2007 1:29 am -

Part 2 (MEET THE # 1 FAN GIRL) "Good, I'm glad you have eyes." You said trying to get away. You kno…Mon May 21, 2007 10:17 pm -

Prologue The group of mounted warriors stopped at the top of the hill. Below them spread out was a …Mon May 21, 2007 3:17 pm -

My story.Mon May 14, 2007 2:07 am -

A secret orginization..Fri May 11, 2007 3:27 am -

New ChapterThu May 10, 2007 4:56 am -

this is my 11th chapter it is pretty small but i think it is a good one PLEASE COMMENT :!: Chapter …Sat Apr 28, 2007 7:58 pm -

here is the tenth chapter tell me what you think Garak so far COMMENT PLEASE :!: Chapter 10 Egamull…Sat Apr 28, 2007 5:13 pm -

{back on recent demands}Fri Apr 27, 2007 1:53 am -

here is my ninth chapter ithink the diologue in the beginning is a little bit...not right PLEASE CO…Wed Apr 25, 2007 11:06 pm -

I introduce a new character in this one and i would appreciate a character impression on her PLEASE…Tue Apr 24, 2007 1:51 am -

This is my 7th chapter i am relly pleased with where this book is headed PLEASE COMMENT :D Chapter …Sun Apr 22, 2007 7:38 pm -

This is my sixth chapter that i just wrote so it isn't that good SO PLEASE COMMENT :D :) :( :o :? 8…Sun Apr 22, 2007 1:16 am -

Here is the last chapter i have typed up so far please comment i am proud of it :!: Chapter 5 The G…Thu Apr 19, 2007 11:16 pm -
pleze crit, I just wrote this, tell me what you think.Wed Apr 18, 2007 8:28 am -

--- Major re-write coming soon! --- They said it had begun years ago, before I could remember, befo…Sun Apr 15, 2007 2:04 pm -

Here is chap 4 of my book its shorter than the others please comment :!: Chapter 4 The Dream Rone w…Sun Apr 15, 2007 2:20 am -
Prologue of my new idea. Hope you like it!Sun Apr 15, 2007 1:56 am -

Third Tale of the Dark KensaiFri Apr 13, 2007 6:49 pm -

Here is chapter 2 of my book please comment I NEED IT there is an edited version out there somewher…Sat Apr 07, 2007 1:00 am -

Updated as of 3 AprilFri Apr 06, 2007 4:43 am -

Fear of the dark Chapter One 'Keep driving, don't look back, just keep driving' The only thought go…Tue Apr 03, 2007 8:08 pm -
Prologue and Chapter One.Tue Apr 03, 2007 10:53 am -

Experimental story, it might suck...Sat Mar 31, 2007 9:28 pm -

a good bookSat Mar 31, 2007 1:27 am -

Mercy of the Sword Saint: PrologueThu Mar 29, 2007 11:46 pm
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