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Prologue The streets were covered with black ice and frost. The tall, bald man in front of 15 Apple…Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:42 pm -
My new ideaWed Mar 14, 2007 8:49 pm -
the first 2 chapters of my bookFri Mar 09, 2007 3:08 pm -

First Chapter: BeginingsThu Mar 08, 2007 8:55 am -
Chapter One The Slow Life The school bell of Dunsire High School sounded its noise; the noise that …Thu Mar 08, 2007 2:20 am -
International School of DanceThu Mar 08, 2007 1:31 am -

can you tell me what you think of thisWed Mar 07, 2007 8:10 pm -

Chapter 2Thu Mar 01, 2007 12:54 am -

still working on title this is an excerpt from my book.Wed Feb 21, 2007 9:38 pm -
Pro-louge availible. Updated on 2-15-07Wed Feb 21, 2007 2:12 am -
"Who do you work for?" Demanded a ferocious muscular man with deadly black eyes. Struggling against…Wed Feb 21, 2007 2:05 am -

It is the 41st Millenium and there is only war!!Sat Feb 10, 2007 1:44 pm -

Third Tale of the Dark KensaiThu Feb 08, 2007 3:52 am -

Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 4Thu Jan 18, 2007 5:36 am -

Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 3Wed Jan 17, 2007 6:03 pm -

There were many things I could say that my mother deserved that made my hatred look pathetically in…Tue Jan 16, 2007 10:00 pm -

Third Tale of the Dark KensaiMon Jan 15, 2007 5:15 pm -

Third Tale of the Dark KensaiMon Jan 15, 2007 4:55 pm -

Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 2Mon Jan 15, 2007 1:07 pm -

this used to be chapter 1Fri Jan 12, 2007 1:52 am -

"My life seems as though to have something in its eye, and it keeps blinking back and forth. Realit…Fri Jan 12, 2007 1:38 am -

this ones called shadowsMon Jan 01, 2007 12:36 pm -

this is a draft, make as many corrections as possible!Sun Dec 31, 2006 5:18 pm -

"My world has been turned upside down. I feel as though I have fell into the rabbit's hole, and Ali…Sat Dec 30, 2006 7:58 pm -

after the IntroThu Dec 28, 2006 4:26 am -

this is my first draft please make correctionsSat Dec 23, 2006 8:48 pm -

WARNING: this used to be my prolouge, i've changed it aroundThu Dec 21, 2006 11:46 pm -

this is a draft make as many corrections as u can pleaseSun Dec 10, 2006 7:11 pm -

This was all based on a dream...Thu Nov 23, 2006 2:11 pm -

Chapter 1 The Bad Beginning As I walked down 12th St. a group of guys came up behind me. I thought …Fri Nov 17, 2006 10:03 pm -
“There, I told you there was new shop here," he looked smugly at him. He sighed… “Okay, I get it Ga…Wed Nov 08, 2006 7:48 pm -

Prologue: The best of my talents was always reading. Not Cask of Amontillado reading, but actual re…Wed Nov 08, 2006 7:33 pm -
R for gore and vilence. feel free to edit all you want!Sat Oct 28, 2006 10:34 pm -

Prelude and chapter 1Sat Oct 28, 2006 10:25 pm -
He was running through the underbrush. The wind was strong and unrelenting, seemingly taking direct…Thu Sep 21, 2006 5:41 pm -
Hey people, this is my first attempt at a novel, so yeah, any critisism is greatly appriciated! The…Thu Aug 31, 2006 1:16 am -
Chapter 2 When David buzzed to be let into the orphanage, he wanted nothing more than to go get in …Tue May 02, 2006 11:43 am -

This is the opening to a novel I have in my head. Hopefully, it will eventually get put onto paper.…Thu Apr 06, 2006 6:16 pm -
Gary looked round when David handed him the toy the man looking like he had accomplished something,…Sun Mar 12, 2006 10:14 am -
“There, I told you there was new shop here," he looked smugly at him. He sighed… “Okay, I get it Ga…Fri Mar 10, 2006 7:59 pm -

A short story that relates to my new novel; this introduces the character Robert Shaw and the ship …Sat Mar 04, 2006 1:45 am -

Hey! Long time since i've been on here. Haven't been writing in ages but I started again recently. …Fri Mar 03, 2006 7:31 pm -

Ch. 1 It was an unbearably hot day in the land of Samutone as a large crowd of people were gathered…Wed Feb 08, 2006 2:43 am -

Removed. I thank those who critique it.Sat Jan 14, 2006 4:51 am -

Thanks to all the people who checked the original version I was able to make it allot better. Hope …Fri Dec 30, 2005 6:04 pm -

please leave crit, any and all is appreciated. preface The Boom Boom Room operated on strict premis…Fri Dec 30, 2005 5:49 pm -

This the next chapter in the novel I was working on. Thanks to the replies I was able to continue. …Wed Dec 14, 2005 1:52 am -

This is some thing I have been working on for a while. Hope you like it :D Akaira walked down the m…Thu Nov 24, 2005 6:39 pm -

Thanks to all the help I got I was able to eddit this. Hope you like it. :D I am thinking of callin…Mon Nov 14, 2005 4:51 am -

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