Across Worlds

Across Worlds

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    Across Worlds Club Update · Jun 11, 2015
    I'm doooooone! Woo! I actually finished Tuesday night, but I spent a few days trying to get the perfect last line because the original one I wrote was terrible xD

    It's funny how you can start off a novel with one story in mind and then you realize halfway through that you're telling the wrong story. As I was wrapping this up it became apparent that I've really been telling Akia's story the entire time, with Falyn's sprinkled in there occasionally. That's something I'm looking forward to for the second draft though because Akia is awesome ^_^ Anyway, I think I did a good job wrapping up everything I had in mind when I first started. Hopefully.

    I split into two parts that ended up being longer than I thought (sorry in advance for the length): Across Worlds - Chapter 43 Part 1 and Across Worlds - Chapter 43 Part 2

    Thank you to all of you guys for sticking with me through this and encouraging me. You guys are the best! All the love to you <3

    Deanie replied · Jun 11, 2015

    I am going to read all of this novel! <3 It'll be done soon, hopefully. And congrats on managing to write all of this!


    r4p17 replied · Jun 11, 2015

    Yay!! Congratulations! :D

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    Across Worlds Club Update · Jun 8, 2015
    So, I had to rearrange a few things to make this chapter work. The last chapter I wrote (chapter 41) is now a single chapter and has a few paragraphs added on that I didn't have last week. Chapter 42 is on the longer side, but I wasn't about to split it into two again. It just didn't seem right. Here's the link: Across Worlds - Chapter 42 . Beware, there could be a lot wrong with it considering I didn't even read it over before submitting. For some reason I couldn't figure out which perspective I needed to write it in. That was the real struggle.

    In happy news, next week will be the final week! I have one chapter left to write and I'll post it all at once, in either parts or a single shot. Who knows. I'm almost done and it feels so great! I might even end up posting early in the week because of my excitement :3

    Now I need to sleep. I think I might be asleep while writing this actually. So if it this just sounds like rambling or doesn't make sense that would be way.
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    Across Worlds Club Update · May 23, 2015
    Remember months and months ago when I promised you guys a map? Well, I finally got it done.

    Please excuse my terrible drawing ability :3
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    Basically all of that water that goes around and between the worlds is the Sumner River fyi. Didn't feel like labeling all of them.

    Noelle replied · May 23, 2015

    Aaaaaand it didn't work. Awesome. I shall try and fix it...


    Noelle replied · May 23, 2015

    Alright, if you click this link it should work.

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    Across Worlds Club Update · May 23, 2015
    I actually didn't procrastinate this week (I don't know what's wrong with me) and finished my entire chapter, so I just posted both parts. There should be two more chapters after this unless I end up extending the fight scene. I won't know until I write it out. As of now, two more chapters and I'm done!! :D There will be a sequel and maybe more books so don't expect everything to be completely solved yet. That's my kinda sorta spoiler for you guys xD

    Enjoy!
    Across Worlds - Chapter 40 Part 1
    Across Worlds - Chapter 40 Part 2

  • SpiritedWolfe replied · May 18, 2015

    I'm still proud of you <3


    Noelle replied · May 18, 2015

    Thanks :) At least I finally got it done.


  • Noelle Creator
    Hi guys! So, I'm here to ask for your advice once again. I mine as well pick your brains one more time :3 (not figuratively of course... ew)

    I'm starting to really think about how I'm going to end this novel and I think I have it figured out. What I want to know from you guys is what do you hope to see resolved by the end of this novel? I'm going to be writing at least a sequel to this so keep that in mind. Just wanted to get some opinions :) Thank you so much!

    Noelle replied · Apr 23, 2015

    *(not literally of course) ...thought I wrote that wrong. Guess the joke doesn't work now xD


    Alchemist replied · Apr 23, 2015

    If real Zeke isn't a real baddas strong guy comming in pew pewing bad guys, I'd be quite disappointed for realz. (I'm reading your work whenever it's out Noelly, I just really have 0 time to review) I'm not sure if you are setting up for George to backstab Rhyhs but I'd rather prefer him staying bad. Also, somehow I feel like you've made Rhys too powerful for any of your characters to manage, so I don't know how can you deal with him. Also one thing you can work on harder is manifestations of these powers. I feel Rhys is powerful rather from what you said than from what you have shown to us in fights and stuff. Ehh, if you want anything more specific, please ask!


  • Noelle replied · Apr 12, 2015

    *sooooo close to the end


  • Noelle replied · Apr 6, 2015

    P.S. I apologize for all the dialogue in this. It's a lot more than I'm comfortable with, but that's the only thing that was coming to me tonight. Stupid lack of inspiration making my procrastination worse.

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    Across Worlds Club Update · Mar 23, 2015
    It seems like every time I write a chapter about Falyn, it doesn't live up to my standards. I think I've spent so much time worrying about Akia and the villains that everyone else has been pushed to the side. I want to just quit now and start rewriting. BUT I promised myself I wouldn't do that. As terrible as I think this is getting, I'm going to push through and finish. I have too much pride to quit anyway :3 Or maybe it's just stupid determination...

    Onto the real reason for this post. Here's the next part! Across Worlds - Chapter 35 Part 2 Enjoy :3 enjoy another lame look at me attempting to put as much feeling into Falyn's POV that I do Akia's


Poetry lies its way to the truth.
— John Ciardi