Across Worlds

Across Worlds

A club for those who follow my novel

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    Noelle · Apr 23, 2015
    Hi guys! So, I'm here to ask for your advice once again. I mine as well pick your brains one more time :3 (not figuratively of course... ew)

    I'm starting to really think about how I'm going to end this novel and I think I have it figured out. What I want to know from you guys is what do you hope to see resolved by the end of this novel? I'm going to be writing at least a sequel to this so keep that in mind. Just wanted to get some opinions :) Thank you so much!

    Noelle replied · Apr 23, 2015

    *(not literally of course) ...thought I wrote that wrong. Guess the joke doesn't work now xD


    Alchemist replied · Apr 23, 2015

    If real Zeke isn't a real baddas strong guy comming in pew pewing bad guys, I'd be quite disappointed for realz. (I'm reading your work whenever it's out Noelly, I just really have 0 time to review) I'm not sure if you are setting up for George to backstab Rhyhs but I'd rather prefer him staying bad. Also, somehow I feel like you've made Rhys too powerful for any of your characters to manage, so I don't know how can you deal with him. Also one thing you can work on harder is manifestations of these powers. I feel Rhys is powerful rather from what you said than from what you have shown to us in fights and stuff. Ehh, if you want anything more specific, please ask!



Doubt thou the stars are fire, doubt that the sun doth move. Doubt truth to be a liar, but never doubt I love.
— "Hamlet," William Shakespeare