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Sorry for not being too consistent on story writing because i've been trying my hands on poetry. Take a look at this story which needs your critiques because i need ...
praisejoe - Dec 31, 2008 - 4 min read
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I wrote this over a year back. Please critique harshly. Thanks! And, HappyNewYear!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ They say love is an overpowering emotion. Whoever ‘they’
Lava - Dec 31, 2008 - 9 min read
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The chapters are going to come slower from now on. Happy New Year's Eve to everyone! And thanks for your comments, in advance. I hope it manages to meet your ...
Meep(: - Dec 31, 2008 - 9 min read
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it really needs editions, and i'm open for suggestions.. Chapter Two “They will never know” When the first faint hue of sunlight crept inside their room, Katie was already up. ...
telle_04 - Dec 31, 2008 - 20 min read
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Once again I'd request you read this with a beat ^^ Also please review my other poem (which is better) The Damage of Reality. post478157.html#478157 Please note I am aware ...
Angels-Symphony - Dec 31, 2008 - 1 min read
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It happened again I dreamt of you Of us in the grass Me holding your hand You holding mine The zephyr wind blowing on us The trees singing I can ...
Anonymous - Dec 31, 2008 - 1 min read
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It's a pretty restaurant. We had picked a back table in a nook, further away from the people, and where the candle was almost brighter than the chandelier. The waitress ...
LowKey - Dec 31, 2008 - 4 min read
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Remy shot up and gazed around the dark interior of her new bedroom shaking, “I hate nightmares”, she said, as she pulled the covers closer to her chin. In it ...
beemarie425 - Dec 30, 2008 - 4 min read
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Wow, this poem isn't dark! *pats self* But still, please tear it up and don't worry about hurting my feelings. I do enjoy your comments, good or bad! :3 On ...
Miss Slade - Dec 30, 2008 - 1 min read
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Just want to know if it's worth continuing. Enjoy!~MademoiselleKool Count Dracula had directed me to go to the Golden Krone Hotel, which I found, to my great delight, to be ...
sokool15 - Dec 30, 2008 - 24 min read
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First poetry post in ages
OverEasy - Dec 30, 2008 - 1 min read
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Creep walked up the dark stairway, slowly stepping so that the sound of his approach could not be heard. It would do no good for him to get this close ...
Conrad Rice - Dec 30, 2008 - 8 min read
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hey, well this is my best friends story and she shared it with me. i want to post it to see what you guys think of it. she is not ...
swiit_fantacy - Dec 30, 2008 - 5 min read
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I realize in the first verse I say you alot. If you would please throw out some ideas on how I could change it. ________________________________________________________________________________________
archer123 - Dec 30, 2008 - 1 min read
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The New Year will start off with a bang. People will filled the streets. And even if it was not yet midnight the night was already decorated with different colours. ...
foxfire - Dec 30, 2008 - 3 min read