Young Writers Society

I wrote this, wanted to know if it was any good, hope you like it. It takes place in a land of poverty, A beautiful place, Beaches without water, Children ...

I am just a person walking by, Do i tell the truth or just plain lies? You have no idea what I've heard and seen You have no idea of ...

Into a bag of chips you stick your hand, Generic Chips because thats the brand. Flavor it up with an orignal twist. Wash it all down with a can of ...

I wrote this when I was ten I think... So don't be too brutal... Just wondered if someone could give me some tips so I could improve it and make ...

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this is what happens when you read to much Keats...oi vey. still in the refining process...comments appreciated. CL little princes dregded in slumber wake the mind's width and wonder and ...

My Idol Why can't i be strong like you? I look up to everything you do, The fears you fought The morals you taught The difference you've made The rules ...

It's been a long, narrow pathway. I've had to drag colossal shadoes and gigantic blocks of tin. And they fade at times, (or am I going blind - T C ...

Smile My eyes ache when they watch your face, refusing to smile, smile like you did a long time ago in the bright light of the sun you sparkled, a ...

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Well two of my first poems combined so lets see......named: Fantasy of Hearts Heroes of Heart, They do not part. In a kingdom, where darkness reigns. In the sky the ...

I can't remember if I posted this or not...and if I did, just tell me and I'll delete it. Strong critiquing--PLEASE. you speak paradoxical phenomenons and your heart is an ...

I watch you twist old newspapers, clip twigs, unroll vines, pile them into a shape that will burn,The way you worded this a little confusing. Perhaps instead: "I watch you ...

brad had a girlfriend once when he was twelve she kissed him twice (on the cheek) and leapt into the pond her face pale like a doll’s her blue tears ...

I could sit here and listen To songs that remind me of you Depressing and slow Or energetic. Whatever Just loud and washing over me I could sit with pen ...