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The elf swiftly and silently climbed up the towering oak, using even the pettiest of branches to elevate him up. Two small silver scythes hung around his waist, covered in ...

Hello, I would like to thank: - Pingu - and zankoku_na_tenshi for their reviews of Segment 1. Hopefully, when I post Segment 3, that list will be a bit longer. ...

They wouldn't let him relax. His head was growing heavier and heavier, and an ache started behind his eyes and slowly traveled back through his head, gripping his brain. He ...

Khor heaved back the massive stables doors and took several steps to reach an open room littered with straw. Winterblaze lay amongst the hay and darkness and moved his head ...

* continuation of chapter one part a and the end of chapter one* “It’s the senate.” Sorsha said at last, her voice cool and calm but undeniably firm and authoritative. ...

Chapter Fifteen: Not a Traitor With a tired smile, Sae explains. “I thought you might not recognize me. I’m Sae Noridsemi, of Samei-Kozca.” The Hralhym stiffens, her mismatched eyes widen, ...

Prologue Seeking? Yes. Destroy? No. Helpless? Maybe. Protect? Never. Food? Blood. Death? Battles. Battles? Kill…Why?Evolution. Change. Failure.No!No? Why?Improvements. Yes. Improvements. Feelings. S

Chapter Five Future Meeting, A power Switch, and A Cold Cave The Canaby sisters started to descend from the sky around midday, they dove through the clear sky to the ...

Hello everyone. I've been working on something for a few months now, but my readers in real life aren't the most dependable, especially for solid criticism and feedback. Here's the ...

Jiro sat atop the projection in silence, smoking his cigarette and staring blankly into the sea of lights that was Orbis city. His young face was blank and expressionless, as ...

As per the suggestion of my very first reviewer I have posted the next part of the story in a small portion. In this scene we are introduced to the ...

The Three Queens *Sorry about the weird formatting - I can't seem to make it clear where my paragraphs are and where I've just separated speech from the rest of ...

Hello, I am new the to young writers society and this is my very first post on this site. Please offer and constructive criticism as I know I desperately need ...

Its been a while sense i have writen anything so i typed a part of my story idea that i have had for a while. I woke in a familiar ...

Okay, I know that it has been a long time since I posted a piece from this story, but I think I have reconsidered writing it, so hopefully you all ...