Young Writers Society

Here's a excerpt from my story, feel free to review and give criticism!

This is a vignette I wrote for my english class

It's not a novel, but it's a story written in parts. But there is a lot of pain expressed in it...do not read if you are a little too sensitive.

Going to a birthday party has never been worse.

The perfect cane? Who is this person? Where is his mother now?

This may not have aged well-an old piece of writing, from over a year ago. My english spoken assignment. I ended up with a distinction, yay.

A humorous take on a traditional recipe, for writers

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Story Description Help

I guess... yeah. It's a metaphor for madness. Nuff said.

Text messages. (Contains censored swears.)

Growing up was and is a confusing and wild experience. Feeling lost, or not good enough to achieve your goals. These are my experiences so far.

This was a part of a character idea... and I would appreciate a little help with the wording.

I wrote this thinking about/missing the beach. Not sure what you'd even call it. Prose poetry? Creative Writing? A rambling mess I'll regret posting?

Then you need to introspect.