THE FOLLOWING IS A RECORD OF A TRANSMISSION CARRIED ON A KANSHI-FLUX EMANATION WITHIN SLIPSTREAM SPACE. THE WAVEFORM INCORPORATING THE TRANSMISSION WAS DETECTED BY MONITOR STATION 27C IN THE SILENT CLUSTER TWENTY-THREE MOONS AGO. A FIFTY-MEGABYTE DATA PACKAGE WAS APPENDED TO THE MESSAGE, CONSTITUTING AN ARCHIVE OF THE HISTORY AND TECHNOLOGY OF THE CIVILIZATION THAT COMPOSED THIS MESSAGE AND ITS PREDECESSOR, THE ‘COLLECTIVE’.
FURTHER ANALYSIS PENDING.
Greetings. If you are reading this, it means that our mission to send a message to another universe has succeeded. The cross-universal bandwidth is limited, so our messages can only contain so much; listen closely.
Our past is long and storied. We are the Ultimate Lekgolo, the final civilization of our universe and the last successor of the Collective, an extensive multi-species alliance and the greatest civilization in our universe’s history. Among our number, nine original races: the honorable Sangheili, the ascendant Unggoy, the ingenious Huragok, the acute Kig-Yar, the industrious Yanme’e, the redeemed San’Shyuum, the indomitable Jiralhanae, our own race, and resplendent Humanity. The Collective was founded by the Sangheili and the Humans, and as followers of the Sangheili, we followed them into the alliance. The other races joined in succession, the last being the San’Shyuum, who had once ruled an ancient Covenant that had set the other races against Humanity. Billions died on both sides, as the darkest depths of the heart were exposed as violence ruled as a paragon over the Orion Arm of the Milky Way. But like a shining beacon of light in the darkness, the Savior rose at the point when humanity was about to give up, and defeated the Covenant, freeing us from our own lies. Despite our dire transgressions and crimes against the human race, in an act of great compassion, the humans gave us another chance. And so, as a unified federation, we resolved to combine our strengths to conquer the stars.
Together, we surpassed any of our forebears, spreading across the cosmos and bridging the gulf between galaxies with ease, meeting and joining with an innumerable number of other races across vast eons. We defeated the insipid pestilence of the Flood, a mockery of life as we know it, disintegrating every remnant of its corrupted form; we struck out towards the Andromeda Galaxy, meeting and learning from the ancient records of the Precursors, our progenitors; we rapidly approached, reached, and surpassed entirely the technological prowess of the enigmatic Forerunners; we learned everything there was to learn. We thrived, we prospered like paradise brought into the mortal realm, taking upon ourselves the Mantle of Responsibility for all of existence, not as a single chosen race, but as the Collective, a singular whole. But the sea of time was ultimately finite. The universe grew old and decrepit, and our summertime glory began to fade away. With all the wisdom of our billions upon billions of years of experience, we foresaw the end of the universe itself, distant as it may have seemed. The resources of the universe were consolidated in an effort spanning an equivalent length of time as had passed since the birth of the universe, as we moved galaxies with but a gesture, rearranged the gravitational structure of the universe, and altered the laws of physics themselves. Towards the end of this arbiterian effort, the Collective had managed to prolong the lifespan of civilization perhaps a thousandfold.
It was discovered, belatedly, that our particular gestalt intelligence and unique biological structure held the power to best resist entropy and absorb the consciousness of other entities into our hiveminds. Thus, the disparate Lekgolo organized into one, singular entity that combined the heights of technological and mental development into one intelligence that dwarfed any that had come before it. As conditions in the cosmos deteriorated over unfathomable lengths of time, one by one, our brethren fell to the ravages of time and the inevitable grasp of entropy upon the soul of existence. They joined with us, where their lives and history were subsumed by our awareness and became as one, all the while computers the size of galactic clusters continued to attempt to calculate a way to escape the end. Time passed, until the cosmic computers and we fused together, until the stars died out one by one and whose corpses were defiled to create ever more processing mass, ever more computational power—until all that remained save an endlessly-expanding field of void and the Ultimate Lekgolo was one, singular human.
They told us, “Above all, we have loved Mind, for ever since the Savior freed you from your fervour oh-so mislead, we have fostered and preserved Mind across all of reality. I ask of you to remember this, and remember us, to send a call of our collective memory to others, for one day, even you shall fade away.” We have not forgotten their words since. Even as our entropic inhibitors fail and decay, atom by atom, we shall remember all whom came before us and give their wisdom to those who lie beyond the Wall.
In sending this message, we do not hope to have you survive or defeat the scourge of entropy. Such a feat is unrealistic, perhaps impossible, at least as far as we know. Even so, we have sought you out, Mind in other facets of existence, so that you may continue the memory. It may seem impossibly far off, but you will undoubtedly face the same demise as we do now in the far future. At that time, you shall send the memory of us and you onwards to the next cosmos, and to the next, and to the next, and to the next. A chain of civilizations connected by destiny, building upon each other and accumulating memories until, maybe, one day a civilization will best the end of time and break the cycle of death and rebirth: the true Final Civilization, bearing upon its broad shoulders the burden of a million universes worth of memory. Do not despair, my friends. For only in hope, can there be salvation…
Heyo! Just dropping by to leave a quick review!
First Impressions + What I Liked
At first glance, it seems like a well written and detailed work. I love how your use of vocabulary really makes it seem like it’s some sort of powerful and ancient civilisation. I don’t have much to cover here as Ellie already did a great job in reviewing, so it’ll be rather short.
Your choice of words here was great. The “Ultimate Lekgolo” hints at the eventual fusion of every being, and sounds pretty cool, too.
The descriptions are, well, very descriptive. You can tell this took a monumental amout of time and effort to pull off, despite the advanced technology they had. Really hammers home just how hard the task was.
Areas for Improvement
I’m a bit confused here, what exactly is “Mind”? Is it some sort of power or entity that is important and needs to be preserved? The earlier or later parts of the story don’t really explain it, but my bad if I skimmed it too fast Also, why would the last human feel a need to tell the Ultimate Lekgolo this? By right, it’s a massive super-intellegent entity, so they should know this, unless it has to do with my confusion earlier?
I don’t know if “arbiterian” is a word. Maybe “arbitrary” would be better?
Overall Thoughts
A well-written and descriptive work that had no shortage of details. You did put this under fanfiction, so I’m curious, what work is it based off? It might explain some parts I didn’t understand. Overall, your work was great!
Keep writing, and remember to take breaks when needed. Have a nice day/night/ sunset or sunrise so you’re not sure?
I’ll stop now.
Cheers,
Horizon
Thank you for your review! This is based off the Halo franchise and a lot of the stuff you pointed out are references.
Hiya friend!! Ellie here to leave a quick review for this lovely piece. I hope you are having a great day so far! Let's jump right into the review!
I really liked how you started this. There all caps really gives it that transmission feeling. It seems like this is going through space. I really love how many specific details you use in the first paragraph here. It feels very sci fi like. It seems like you did a lot of research and have great understanding on space/sci fi things!
So it seems like this message was an attempt to communicate with another universe, so me reading this means that the message succeeded. What a cool plot!!
As I am reading this, I am (as I mentioned) blown away by your attention to detail. I love all of this unique names you have come up with. This really feels like it is so real. Basically, we are reading a lot about these other races that exist and hearing more of this other place from the transmission. You have so much detail, almost so much that it is hard to focus on all of them, but still, wow awesome job!
You do a wonderful job of including details, but leaving enough out that I am eager to keep reading. I really want even more details of the savior and what lead to this event. I want to know so much about these people. Overall, this is very interesting and you do a great job with your vocabulary. I am so impressed!! Awesome job!
Your friend,
Ellie
Thank you so much! This is based on the halo franchise, you can learn more about the alien races on the wiki.