Beautiful poem! The metaphors are not overused and the message is deep. Not only the inescapable truth of death, but that innocence can die as well. Just like Radrook a personal chord was struck, but I think almost everyone can relate. I don’t know if you have the same problem as me where you can figure out how to divide the poem into stanzas on this website, or if this was your intention. There isn’t a stanza division. With The commas and periods you have the pauses, but the poem looks clustered. Overall you did an amazing job!
Points: 36
Reviews: 57
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