Hi, this is ZeldaIsShiek, here to review another amazing piece of poetry and beat the Werewolves once and for all! For the Witches shall win in the end! But before that happens, I am going to help you improve your writing as a whole and improve you as a Young Writer in the process. Of this I am certain. Are you ready? Let's begin the review!
The main reason that this poem caught my eye was that it was the only literacy on the first page I had not yet reviewed. Other than that, the title stood out to me the greatest. This is because there are a lot of love songs out there, but this one truly intrigued me. I am Aromantic Asexual, so naturally, I haven't experienced the "Instant Love" you speak of in this poem and in the description. I don't know what love feels like, but that doesn't stop me from liking Romance Novels and being able to write love poems! Something I loves about this poem was the line,
"The way she walked silently the way she talked like poetry dressed in black she looked at me and I fell in love instantly"
because of the sly rhyme at the end and because of the reference to the beginning when you state that she is wearing black. That is because both her dress and her voice are described as being dressed in black. I really like this song. Keep writing songs and poems like this one, and have a great Review Day!
-ZeldaIsShiek
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