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Hey, thanks for the review, thought I'd return the favor:
I really enjoyed this, I studied Romeo and Juliet last year and had to do a similar project. I loved the contrast between their happiness and the future, it fits in very well with Shakespeare's use of prolepsis in the play. Also I love the last line, as it makes it feel very personal and it made me want to know how they will betray you and how they betrayed you before. I wasn't entirely sure who the narrator was, my best guess is love or fate, but I think it's good that there's a bit of mystery as to who is speaking.
Well done, you've written a beautiful sonnet here.
Thank you! I actually have to read it to the class tomorrow as with my other poem called "Waxen Mason Jars"! Once again, thank you so much for the kind comment, it really means a lot