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The Prime Control Chapter 13: The Queen of the Labyrinth

by keeperofgaming

Published June 17, 2024

16+ Violence

In The Prime Control

Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for violence.

As I opened the door to my flat, Aoi landed on my face, wrapping around it, and putting her head on Taury.

“I exited the maw of a predator to enter the grasp of another.”

“Gahk, can’t breathe.”

“Bleh, Taury smelled icky.”

I smiled.

“Being almost eaten by a frog girl will do that to you. Anyways, get off, Taury needs to take a bath.”

“Okay.”

She flipped and landed in a chair.

“So, how’d the run go? Anything interesting happened~?”

“Well, she apparently has a crush on me.”

Aoi looked interested.

“Oh really, what made you think that?”

“The overexaggerated drawings of me as a muscled hunk crushing demons with my biceps.”

She blinked and snorted.

“Yep, definitely a crush.”

Taury had already drifted off and I heard the sound of rushing water in the bathroom.

I sighed.

Then Aoi asked.

“So, what’s this about her nearly getting eaten by a frog?”

“Well, Maven’s world is a very survival of the fittest world, and a frog fey tried to grab her to eat. She ended up with a singed tongue, complaining that prey wasn’t supposed to fight back.”

“Heh, seems like she got what she deserved.”

“Yeah, but we also met a deer guy and a lion girl, and we thought they were okay with each other, but Maven said that the deer guy was likely eaten shortly after we left.”

“Oh…”

“Yeah, it’s a pretty brutal world.”

“I wonder if Maven would be fine with me hunting.”

“Ma-… What?”

“I’m saying, I wonder how fey animals compare to regular animals.”

Then I heard Taury shout from the bathroom.

“We could have frog legs.”

I snickered then I looked at Aoi.

“Even if Maven does allow it, don’t go after wolves. I’d rather not tick her off.”

“Okay.”

_

The next few days were normal, then I decided to visit another counselor. Maven also said no, as she wanted humans to remain off limits, and she couldn’t justify it if we could hunt.

“Who should we visit?”

Taury looked at me, so I sighed.

“What about Astella? I’ve not met her yet.”

“Oh, she’s a fun one. She loves training her strength. Her species is capable of magic, but they don’t touch it, they use their strength alone.”

“Wow, what do they live in, a labyrinth, a castle?”

“As far as I know they all live in various personal gyms. Each family has its own work out place. I’ve seen Astella’s and oh boy, I’m pretty sure she sleeps on the equipment.”

“Why?”

“Well, you’ll see when we get there.”

Then we appeared in a gym, where a brown furred minotaur was bench pressing a bar as wide as me and double my length, with weights that were the size of three of me.

“Oh…”

The walls were painted red, and the floor was a wooden pattern. It looked like a school’s gym. Of course, there was about three times the amount of equipment as a subscription gym.

There were bench presses, treadmills, and even some stuff that looked like it was made to perfectly skin someone, and something else that looked like it was made to rip your limbs off. There were several other tools that looked like torture devices.

Several minotaurs were in here, bench pressing and other things.

Then the minotaur we were looking for stood up and walked over.

“Hello there. I hear you are the mist that yelled at the Pixie.”

“That’s me.”

“Interesting, well, what do you want?”

“I just have been getting to know the councilors and thought that I should introduce myself.”

“Well, little monkey, you’ll need to prove your strength if you want to know me personally. Each one of these people have proven their strength before being able to enter my gym. You got in by nexus, so you got to prove yourself, or I’ll throw you straight back through.”

Why did all council members try to be scary? It worked too.

“I’ll… take the challenge, what is it?”

“Heh, accepting before knowing, I like it. Pick that up.”

I looked at a bar that I saw a minotaur try and fail to even roll.

“This seems a bit unbalanced…”

“Listen, I don’t like the monkeys being in my realm, much less in my gym, to prove you have the metal to make me respect you, lift it. No magic.”

Taury looked at her in shock.

“Astella, this is a bit ridiculous.”

“Please, if the human can’t pick it up, he has no reason… to… be here?”

I lifted up one edge. All of my muscles stretched and tensed. I got under it and edged the other side the slightest bit in the air before collapsing, dropping it behind me.

I breathed deeply.

“I didn’t lift it long… but I lifted it… Do I pass?”

Astella grinned,

“Yes, little monkey, I suppose you do.”

She helped me up.

“Well, as you already know, I am Astella, queen of the minotaurs, ruler of the Labyrinth. Now, introduce yourself.”

“Labyrinth?”

“Yeah, I ruled it back when I took a trip to your world.”

“Did you know Theseus?”

“Theseus? Hm… Oh I remember him, the prideful kid no one liked.”

“Cool, but I’m William.”

“Cool. Yeah, I hope you’re not like Theseus, prideful as he was, I can’t deny his skill with a blade.”

“Really, wh-oh.”

She turned around, revealing a massive scar on her back.

“The brat thought he killed me, the only human who bested me… with his paralyzing poison of course.”

“Oh, what do you mean don’t be like Theseus, just don’t attack you? That should be easy.”

“Nope, I’m saying that if you do attack me, face me like a man. A stab in the back gives no honor.”

I smiled.

“Glad to see we agree on that.”

She smiled back.

“Well, you know me now, go work out if you want to.”

“Uhm.”

“What is it?”

“Could you tell me what that’s for, because it looks like it’s intended to delimb you.”

She snorted.

“It was originally made for that, but we realized that it’s much better to test your arm strength, if your arm gets ripped off, you lose.”

“Oh…”

“Wanna try it?”

“I’ve lost my arm in recent days, not too interested in losing it again.”

She looked at me confused.

“You lost an arm?”

“And a leg. It was a whole situation.”

“Then how do you have them.”

“Magic, tons upon tons of magic.”

“Wow, that’s actually impressive…”

She looked genuinely impressed.

I looked at her.

“Where would you suggest I start?”

She smiled.

“Well, since you graciously came to me for advice, I’d suggest the crusher.”

“The… crusher?”

“Another repurposed torture device. This one tries to flatten you.”

“… Yay…”

I was right, they were torture devices.

_

Taury became her big form, as apparently she’d been here before, and worked out as I struggled with the crusher.

True to it’s name, it tried to crush me. I held it up.

According to another minotaur, I was supposed to see how long I could hold it as it’s pressure increased.

Taury nodded and said that was correct, so for the next hour I stood there.

At this point, it was as heavy as the bar, but the gradual build-up tired me, so my legs had begun shaking.

Suddenly, it pressed down.

I realized I couldn’t hold it much longer and shimmied to the edge where I collapsed as it slammed down.

I breathed intensely and the minotaur who told me about it looked in shock.

“That was the longest a non-warrior has ever held that. How strong are you?!”

“I guess I’m decently tough. Gramps training was ironically harder.”

I looked up and saw that numerous minotaurs had begun to look at me.

“Wow, he actually held it for a full hour.”

“How could that human do that?”

“He has to have a broken bone.”

“Yeah, he probably used magic.”

“A human with magic? Don’t be ridiculous.”

“Who’s ridiculous? Say it to my face.”

“I just did!”

“Oh, come here, you!”

Then a brawl opened in the gym, and Astella was doing arm curls with the bar I could barely lift and sipping her water.

I’d assume being double my size would help her, but she did it so effortlessly that it was almost like she was born able to bench this.

Her muscles tensed and released in a perfect synchronization.

It was oddly fascinating.

I stood up and walked over.

“How do you have that perfect of a curl form?”

“Been training my whole life, not like I woke up one day able to do it, how’d you get as strong as you are?”

“My gramps trained me, and I have shinobi training as well, so I had to learn how to be really strong.”

“Hmph, I assume you surpassed your teachers then?”

“Nope, Gramps could probably sleep and hold that up.”

Astella laughed.

“No human is that strong.”

“I thought so too, until he showed me his collection of demon stones.”

Astella’s eyes widened.

“C-collection.”

“Yep, hundreds of the things.”

“Okay, humans may be a bit stronger than I first believed.”

“I think it’s just Gramps.”

“Hopefully, if humans can take on hundreds of demons en masse, then there would be no one who could stop them, especially given how populous they are.”

“Yeah, that would be terrifying.”

“Anyways, let me see your curl form.”

She gestured to the stand, and I grabbed one that was labeled 40 pounds. I could easily curl it.

I began curling.

“I see, you keep releasing this muscle early.”

“Ah, I didn’t even notice that.”

So, me and her went over specifics in exercises.

_

How did this happen?

Astella told me that if I wanted more training then I’d need to stay the night, so she tossed me a sleeping bag, told me the top of the delimber was the most comfortable and disappeared.

I looked at Taury who seemed contemplative.

“What?”

“Normally, she throws us to the curb after training.”

“What do you mean?”

“As soon as her gym closes, she usually forces everyone back into the nexus and locks her point, I’ve never seen her let someone stay over, I’d suggest remaining cautious, she likely wants something.”

“I see, what do you think it is?”

She looked at me.

“Do you really think I know?”

“I don’t know, but you know her better than I do.”

“There are various potential reasons. Firstly, she may want to learn how you regrow limbs. Secondly, she may want you to serve her instead of Morgan. Thirdly, she may want to just actually train you. There are various other reasons.”

“So, she could want to train me, or she could want to eat me.”

“Eating you is quite unlikely but that’s pretty much the variety.”

After some thinking, I sighed.

“I can’t sleep.”

“Why not?”

“My magic is begging for release.”

“What?”

“It’s built up and now it’s spasming.”

“Nice.”

“What does that mean?”

“You’re finally at your natural power level.”

“How do most fey handle it?”

“Try leaking it.”

“Leaking it?”

“Like cause the slightest magical movements and use that to drain it to a level you can sleep.”

“Sorta like walking around when you can’t sleep due to built up energy.”

“Exactly.”

So, I thought of which of my magics would be best to use.

“Fire’s a no, light would keep both of us up… Really earth is the way to go.”

“Yeah. Try simply expelling a bit of it.”

“Okay… will that affect my leg… since it’s made with earth magic?”

“I… don’t know. If it goes wrong you should be able to fix it, though.”

“Alright.”

So, I began to leak my magic, my leg was fine. I didn’t do anything deliberate.

Eventually, I was tired enough to fall asleep.

_

“Wake up, human, something happened last night, and I think you can explain to me what it is.”

“What happened?”

“Well, my gym is on top of a mountain.”

“Cool, so what happened?”

“It wasn’t on a mountain yesterday. Nor were there mountains anywhere near it…”

“So… what happened?”

“Do you have earth magic?”

“A bit… yeah?”

“You created a mountain.”

“… HEH?!”

Astella’s words shocked me awake.

“Th-that’s impossible.”

“What exactly did you do?”

“I just released my magic so I could sleep!”

She blinked.

“Taurael, is this true?”

“It is… a mountain?! That’s ridiculous!”

“I’d think so too, had I not nearly fallen after walking out my front door. It’s lucky my gym is more secluded, or other homes would have been thrown around.”

I blanched.

“How did I do that?!”

“I don’t know, you only leaked your magic to sleep and you had that much? Take off that relic and show me your full aura.”

“What?”

“Your power feels like that of a higher fey, but I can tell that little amulet is blocking most of it. Take it off, now!”

I flinched at the ticked off minotaur and reached to take off the amulet.

The moment it passed over my head, Astella leapt back and braced against the wall, and Taury instantly enabled her magic and braced herself.

“What?”

“William… that aura… it’s almost as strong as a demon’s…”

“What?”

“W-w-what are you?”

“I’m a human.”

“Liar, no human can have that much magic, even Arthur was restricted to mid-level fire!”

Taurael nodded.

“He is a human, just an incredibly powerful one, it seems.”

She looked at me.

“Put the amulet back on.”

I did so, and both of them relaxed.

“You sure he’s a human?”

“Yes, he is definitely a human, he just seems to have an abnormal magic attunement.”

“That’s a bit more than abnormal, he could probably overpower higher fey.”

“Probably.”

Then I sighed.

“Could we just train?”

Astella thought for a moment,

“Sure, but meet with me in my quarters this evening.”

“Okay, so what’s todays training?”

“Making an entrance to my gym.”

She smiled and I groaned.

“Oh, and use your fists, no tools. No magic either.”

I sighed.

“Taury?”

“Oh, don’t look at me, I’mma run through drills with Astella, I’m not the one who made a mountain.”

I grimaced before walking carefully out the door.

Then I saw just how big a mountain I made; I could see an entire city in the distance.

“This is Himalayan size…”

And… I had to make an entrance… with no magic… in one day.

“Yippee…”

So, I set out to work.

_

“And done.”

“Human? What happened?”

“Um… I accidentally did this in my sleep, so Ms. Astella is forcing me to make an entrance.”

“Wow… you an earth user?”

“Yeah… sorry…”

“Honestly that’s quite impressive, so, how do we get up there?”

I sighed.

“There are two entrances, first is a simple stairwell, that took a few hours to make and it still needs refining. The second is a rock wall.”

“A rock wall?”

I gestured to the various holes.

“Basically, you climb to the top, but there are holes in the mountain side to make it easier to climb.”

“Woah… I’mma try that.”

Then a line of minotaurs made a line to go up the rock wall.

Some tried going up the stairs, only to be called cowards and get peer pressured into trying the wall.

Astella came out and slid down the mountain side.

“Alright, what’s happening… I repeat, what’s happening?”

“Um, I made a hard and easy way, stairs and a climbing challenge.”

“That wasn’t smart.”

“Why?”

“Minotaurs always go the way of most resistance. You should have done the stairs only.”

Then a minotaur fell, screaming.

“Help me!!!”

Many tried to assemble, but the minotaur fell from high enough that it wouldn’t matter.

I waved my hands and summoned a gravel cloud, using fire to inflate it softer. The minotaur landed and broke through it, but then fell a lot lighter to the ground.

She sat up.

“That was terrifying. You, Human. No one can get up that. It’s impossible!”

I blinked.

“It’s not even that challenging of a wall, there’re no overhangs.”

“Then you do it.”

“Okay.”

The minotaurs cleared out and I stood, breathed deeply, then I leapt up, grabbing the third hole, and threw myself hole to hole, climbing up the wall.

Within ten minutes, I reached the top and looked over before shouting.

“See? It is possible.”

I walked down the stairs and a few minotaurs gaped at me.

“Okay, not impossible…”

Astella looked impressed, then she shouted.

“I’ll set up a safety here, but for now, use the stairs.”

Some complained, while others, including the first minotaur seemed happy to do the stairs.

Astella looked at me.

“To think, you made two entrances…”

“Well, the stairs are kind of simplistic.”

“Yeah, they’re just stacked rocks in crevices, but you still managed to do it.”

“Yeah, I guess.”

“Anyways, we can talk sooner, meet me in my quarters.”

“Okay, what are we going to talk about?”

She smiled.

“Business.”

_

“So, what did you mean, business?”

“First, I want to know something, why are two councilors enamored with you?”

“What?”

“Malkek can’t stop mentioning your honor and genius, and Maven flat out has a crush on you. I can’t seem to figure out why?”

“Well, I proved to Malkek that Taury was innocent, and Maven… I don’t actually know.”

“Huh, well that explains Malkek, but yeah Maven, after your camping with her, I sort of just assumed you wooed her or something. What exactly happened?”

“Well, I did trick that demon.”

“That’s another thing I can’t figure out, how did you, of all people, trick a demon…? Their screw ups are rare, and that’s a pretty major screw up.”

“As I’ve told others. I basically yelled at him to release me and her, and then he said it back.”

“Yeah, but it seems too simple.”

“Yeah, it felt that way too.”

“I’d imagine, but how did the demons even know what would happen?”

“What?”

“I mean, according to Maven’s story, Mordred was at the stream randomly, but the other demons mentioned something like, send him out, implying that they knew where you’d be.”

I blinked.

“That makes a lot of sense, could Mordred have been spying on us from the get go?”

“No, because according to Morgan, you guys never disappeared until you went to the stream, except for the talking rock thing that I still think is a lie.”

“Nope, not a lie, but… how would they know if none of them detected us beforehand?”

I thought for a moment.

“You think there was a mole?”

Astella nodded.

“Some humans have sworn loyalty to demons to prevent from being eaten. They inform them, assist them, and all other sorts of things.”

“You think that someone in the class is sworn to serve demons?”

“It’s only a guess, but not one that you can ignore. Another explanation is that they smelled Taurael’s power and sent Mordred where they thought she was heading.”

I sighed.

“That makes more sense to me than a mole.”

Astella also sighed.

“Yeah, I suppose it does.”

I thought for a moment.

“Anything else?”

“Yeah, I’m actually somewhat curious about the rock, because Morgan said that you just flat out went missing, and Mordred wasn’t near at that point.”

“Yeah, the gem took us to her own realm. I started calling her Arty, cause that’s short for Artifact, which she said that she was called at one point.”

“Hm… Artifact…”

“The Merpeople in the lake call it the Elder Stone.”

“Hm… Yes, I saw it a thousand years ago, when Taurael was showing us the lake. It’s alive?”

“Yeah, Taury was as surprised as you are.”

“Wow, did it say anything interesting?”

“Well, it refers to me as my mother’s name, because apparently, she was more historically important.”

“So, what does she call you?”

“Child of Amelia.”

“Hm… don’t know any Amelias unfortunately.”

“Darn it. So, only Morgan has the potential to know.”

“Why would Morgan know?”

“Because she marked my father’s grave.”

Astella blinked.

“She did?”

“Yes, I don’t know their relation, but Taury recognized Morgan’s wood made up his gravestone.”

Astella considered for a second.

“Are you trying to find your mother?”

“That’s why I originally came to Challsville in the first place.”

“Huh…”

She seemed deep in thought.

“Well, I’ll look out for any information.”

“Thanks…”

“What?”

I looked at her.

“Could I ask about some history. Like for some elaboration?”

“Why?”

“Well, because I’ve heard legends of Theseus and other Grecian heroes, but I wasn’t there, so I can’t really tell how they went.”

She smiled.

“Sure, I could elaborate a few things.”

“Nice… why did Theseus attack you?”

“Phew, that’s a rough one. I’m sure you heard about how I supposedly imprisoned his people. Well, I kind of did, except the people I imprisoned tried to kill me for no reason.”

“Huh, so, how did it happen?”

“Well, the walls of the labyrinth had poison berries that caused paralyzation, so he lined his sword with it and when we began fighting, he was poisoning me with the slightest things. I wasn’t even trying to kill the boy. After the poison took effect, I fell and he slashed my back open, then he acted like a hero.”

“Huh… do people like Zeus exist?”

She snickered.

“They don’t but they are inspired from actual people. A good example for that is Morgan.”

“Really?”

“Yeah, she inspired Frigga of the Norse.”

“Really?”

“Yeah.”

“Wow… did you know Heracles?”

“Oh, yeah, he was a tough cookie. Me and him sometimes talked. He loathed Theseus, claiming that because of his pride and trickery, he ruined the names of heroes.”

“Makes sense, what of Oedipus.”

“Oh… that guy, yeah, it really sucked. He killed his dad out of necessity, and even swore to find the king’s killer. They treated him horribly, and honestly, I was half tempted to ravage his city because of their cruelty to the one that ruled them justly.”

“Why didn’t you?”

“Because Oedipus asked me to not.”

“I see…”

“Yeah, he was a truly good person.”

“Did he actually gouge out his eyes?”

“… Yeah… I offered to find someone to heal him, but he refused.”

“Huh…”

“His story is probably one of the few that humans didn’t dramatize.”

I thought for a moment.

“Did you know Orion?”

“Never met the guy, but I do know that he had water magic. For that, you’d need to ask Roman.”

“Why Roman?”

“He inspires Hephaestus and numerous other Grecian gods. He also knew the person who inspired the legend of Artemis. Though, if I remember correctly, she gave up her no man vow and married him.”

“Wow… the story ends much differently.”

“Yeah, the Greeks weren’t big on mind changing.”

“Wow…”

“Yep.”

“Huh… were you involved in any other legends?”

“Not really.”

I sighed, then Astella asked a question.

“About this… Artifact, do you know who called her that?”

“No, but she called him the First Song. Do you know who that is?”

She thought for a moment.

“Nope, never heard of him.”

I sighed.

“Unfortunate.”

“Indeed, with a title like the First Song, he has to be incredibly powerful, likely, though, it’s just some fey big shot from millennia before Morgan was born.”

“Maybe, but she said I acted similarly to him in the past.”

“Yeah, and you act like an Archon, so maybe it was an Archon big shot.”

“What exactly is an Archon?”

“Peace loving weirdos with intensely powerful magic. Their supposedly more magically attuned than atronachs.”

“Woah…”

“Yeah, so I wouldn’t be surprised if you were confused with one every now and then.”

“Alvane already thought I was an Archon.”

“Alvane… Alvane… Oh right, one of the Knights of Avalon. I remember her, yeah I could see her confusing you with one.”

“Huh…”

Then I looked at her.

“So, anything else you need?”

She thought for a moment.

“Actually, yes, I think there is. There was a cave I used to use as a personal lab, I need you to put this thing in it.”

“Why?”

“To activate security, though, a word of warning, don’t read any of the documents there, it’s full of classified files.”

“I see, don’t worry.”

“Good to know I can count on you. Oh, and please don’t bring Taurael.”

“Why not?”

“Because that pixie is incredibly nosy.”

“Oh, alright.”

I walked out of the quarters and saw Taury doing pull ups.

“Wow, nice form.”

“Are you talking about my exercise or are you flirting?”

“Exercise.”

“Lame.”

“Sorry, I just learned a crap ton about Greek mythology, I’m considering historical stuff.”

She thought for a moment.

“I can tell you a bit about American mythology, and a bit about norse mythos.”

“Really?”

“Yeah, I inspired a few gods myself. Heck the Greeks called me Aphrodite.”

“Anything else.”

“I was also occasionally called Athena too.”

“Wow… any norse gods?”

“Hm… me and Morgan inspired different parts of Frigga, so I suppose that would work, other than that, no not really.”

“Wow.”

“Yeah, I am quite old compared to numerous fey, so I guess you can say you discovered a relic.”

“Maybe.”

She jumped off the bar in front of me and smirked.

“Wanna find out what I can do~?”

I flushed and sputtered.

“M-maybe later.”

“Awe, is someone flustered~”

“Maybe?”

“Nice. Anyways, did you talk about anything else?”

“She wants me to handle something for her tomorrow.”

She looked somewhat surprised.

“Wow, what is it?”

“Setting up security in an old lab of hers.”

“Nice, I should get ready.”

“Actually, she said I shouldn’t bring you.”

“Why not?”

“Because you’re nosy.”

She blinked.

“I’m not nosy.”

I looked at her with a raised brow, recalling all the times she tried sneaking into the bathroom to figure out what I was doing in there, and the other times where she’d read over my shoulder to figure out what I was doing.

“Okay, I’m a bit nosy, but I wouldn’t do that.”

“Too bad, you can’t come.”

“Awe…”

Then she gave me puppy dog eyes.

“Pleeeeeease?”

“No.”

She sighed and went back to working out, so I did the same, acting as her spotter, and she acted as mine.

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Ravena wrote a review Review · Jun 17, 2024

Hello Again, My Friend!

Hopefully you're not sick of me just yet, haha! With time on my plate for once, of course I wanted to catch up on Prime Control as well! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh heh...

What The Black Eyes See...

This was awesome! We finally got the chance to learn more about Astella and the minotaurs, and she didn't disappoint! The elaborations on mythology and fey were a great bonus to the whole thing, and there were lots of funny moments mixed in. Let's get into the details though.

Where The Dagger Points...

Not much to put here! I liked the settings and learning more about the minotaurs, but I did notice just one thing along the way, very minor and nitpicky (so I won't be surprised if you want to ignore it lol).

True to it’s name, it tried to crush me.


Since "it's" is more of a shortened form of "it is," I think the proper word would just be "its" with no apostrophe. That's all! Great writing job ~

Why The Grin Widened...

Okay, right off the bat, Aoi made me laugh...

“I exited the maw of a predator to enter the grasp of another.”


Ever the clingy one, haha. I also enjoyed the banter about Maven's world (and her fanart XD), and Taury remarking that they could have frog legs in reference to the frog girl from last chapter.

Ooo, we get to see more about Astella and her side of the fey world! Awesome! I was wondering when she would reappear. Starting with her living quarters, I'm not too shocked that there's a lot of stuff dedicated to increasing and honing strength, but the sheer volume was a shock!

“Well, little monkey, you’ll need to prove your strength if you want to know me personally. Each one of these people have proven their strength before being able to enter my gym. You got in by nexus, so you got to prove yourself, or I’ll throw you straight back through.”


Oooo, so William has to prove his strength to freaking minotaurs? I was wondering how this would go, and the fact that he lifted the bar -even slightly- was a surprise. And Astella's reaction was amusing as well. Moving on, the story about the Labyrinth and Theseus, and Astella being the one who was attacked, was another really cool link between this fey world and ancient mythologies. I also really liked what Astella said about fighting her, and not being like Theseus...

“Nope, I’m saying that if you do attack me, face me like a man. A stab in the back gives no honor.”


I mean, she's not wrong! And with William's explanation for his great strength, proven with both the bar and the crusher, I have one question...What the heck was Gramps teaching him?! O.O I will say, it was cool to see William and Astella bonding over training and tips, it really makes you think that he'll win her favor and have another council member on his side.

“As soon as her gym closes, she usually forces everyone back into the nexus and locks her point, I’ve never seen her let someone stay over, I’d suggest remaining cautious, she likely wants something.”


I was baffled already by the recommendation for William to sleep on the de-limber, but with this quip from Taury, it made things even more confusing. Indeed, what would Astella want from a human?

I was cringing as soon as Taury said that William should start leaking a bit of his magic, but this being the result...

“Do you have earth magic?”

“A bit… yeah?”

“You created a mountain.”

“… HEH?!”


WOAH! William's over here just making mountains apparently! What the heck?! And this time, in confronting him about his magic, Astella has revealed something very cool and very chilling to think about.

“William… that aura… it’s almost as strong as a demon’s…”


So William is on par with a demon, at least in aura?! I can't help wondering, with all the incredible power that seems to just naturally come from him, and now this remark, if there's a connection to be drawn. What that connection is? I have no idea, but it has me generating theories...

I love how Taury just left him hanging when Astella ordered him to carve out a new entrance with no magic, lol.

“Minotaurs always go the way of most resistance. You should have done the stairs only.”


I mean, it was clever for William to create a more challenging route for these guys, but Astella has a good point here XD

It's interesting that Astella was willing to talk "business" with William, and the first thing she brought up was why two councilors are so intrigued by him. Then, getting into the encounter with Mordred at the stream, I didn't think there would be anything to it, but man did she just prove me wrong...

“Some humans have sworn loyalty to demons to prevent from being eaten. They inform them, assist them, and all other sorts of things.”


A mole?! Someone in that group, serving demons?! Now that's a huge twist I didn't see coming, and it just raised the stakes so much! Plus, Astella being able to collect everyone's stories and deduce this really gave the impression that as well as being powerful, she is also pretty keen. Between that and her being willing to keep an ear out for information on Amelia, it makes me like her character even more!

Even though they immediately tried to backtrack on the mole idea by bringing up the possibility of someone sensing Taury's power, hm...I mean, it does make sense since Mordred seemed to operate on a sense of smell and had a strong reaction to Taury's, but it didn't seem to kick in until he was within a close vicinity of William...I find it all sus >.>

“Well, because I’ve heard legends of Theseus and other Grecian heroes, but I wasn’t there, so I can’t really tell how they went.”


I love that William used this conversation with Astella as a chance to learn more about mythology, how it correlates to fey, and what's right about the legends as they know them. It was cool seeing so many namedrops and learning how fey inspired the gods they know. Taury being sometimes called Aphrodite was a cute insert, haha. Then, looping back to fey, the mention of Archons caught me off-guard, since that word's been thrown around before. Although...

“Peace loving weirdos with intensely powerful magic. Their supposedly more magically attuned than atronachs.”


I like Astella's explanation better, just because it amuses me XD

I wonder where Astella's final assignment will lead him! And if Taury is nosy enough to ignore the warnings, haha.

Our Mad Thoughts...

Overall, that was another awesome chapter, nicely done! :D

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creeperfeverdreams wrote a review Review · Jun 17, 2024

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today!

Shalt we commence with the spooky S’more?

Top Graham Cracker - William and Taury travel to Astella’s gym so that William can gain the respect of Astella. He successfully gains her respect, but now he must go out to a cave…will he come back?

Slightly Burnt Marshmallow - I think that you meant to put in a question mark for when William asks about history, but that’s just one little thing.

Chocolate Bar - I love the mythology references here, this means that there are more adventures to come for William! I also think it’s a nice detail that some of the exercising equipment are torture devices…

Closing Graham Cracker - William seems to be on good terms with Astella, his power is ever so growing, and now he has to go into a cave for…some reason. Hopefully it isn’t a trap.

I wish you a marvelous day/night! ^v^



By swallowing evil words unsaid, no one has ever harmed his stomach.
— Winston Churchill