Beyond a Closet Door

by dogs

Published March 6, 2012

In Emotional Poetry

Yes I am a boy and yes this is a touchy topic but I thought I'd bring it up anyways because I feel like it isn't adressed enough. Some people just don't know what to do and others are afraid. I'm accepting but please judge my poem instead of the topic of the poem. Happy reading


I want to know,
what it's like outside
my protective shell of lies.

I want to know,
what it's like to be
completely free and
graced with equality.

What a feeling it'd be
to not have to hide,
and not have to lie
to family and friends,
just to shield myself
again and again.

I want to know,
what it's like to be
normal in society.
To not be some freak
that goes home and weeps
behind locked closet doors.

I don't want
to have to fight
for what I know is right.
To convince some majority,
to give me my individuality.

What a thought,
what a childesh dream.
To love whomever you please,
and not be considered a disease.

I want to know,
what it's like
to be me.




TuckEr EllsworTh
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itybityclutz
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itybityclutz commented Comment · Mar 7, 2012

Beautiful

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hudz96
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hudz96 wrote a review Review · Mar 6, 2012

*tears*

Corrections:

2nd to last paragraph i think you wanted to write

What i thought,
was a chidish dream
To love whomever I please,
and not be considered a disease.

You know from all you beautiful poems (take aside my fav one " White Petals" ) This is the one that is the most emotional. I dont know what to write, give me a few moments to sift through my emotions...............................................................................................................................................
Are you okay? :( like really really okay?

I do not know how to make you smile when your poem has made me so sad, is it really so bad? I have a great idea, join my Murdering group and we go kick ‘em all!! Don’t worry and tell Jully to hang in there
Where is that image...Wait for iht....... Image

Don’t cry kay…. Please please please don’t cry. :( or I promise I will cry as well.
Love youh
Hudz
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