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If i say this is extremely cute what would you say??
I would say thank you
, and he's going to love it
hopefully, he hasn't heard it yet...
Hello there, Tucker! Rosie here!

This poem definitely reflects its title. It definitely felt very sugary and sweet, and although I'm not usually a huge fan of these types of poems, I genuinely did like this one. It was gushy, but you did it very well and it was thoroughly awesome.
But, like always, I do have one or two little suggestions. In the sixth line, the word "secrete" simply seems out of place. Perhaps it's just because of the associations I have with it; usually I come across it in science books when the hunting strategies of poisonous toads are being described, so it seems out of place to me in this poem. However, this is entirely my opinion, and the next person who reads this piece might find no problem with it.
The only other thing I'm unsure about is the spelling of one of the words used a few times in this. In your title, you wrote "Suger Coted." I think you might've meant to spell that "coated" - meaning, of course, covered or encased by.
As always, great work, Tucker! I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
-Rosie
Thanks so much for the comment Rose
. Lol ironically me and "secrete" have a completely different associations with each other, quite the opposite from yours. Thank you for pointing out the "coated" misspelling. Keep on writing and let me know if you need a review!