Jogging in place
In a never ending race
Always moving
Never changeing
My legs moving
Up and down
Up and down
always
Till I die
the day I close my eyes
The end of the never ending race
the crazy case
I call life
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All in all, this was a very good poem. It seemed a little bit short to me. Anyway, good job, keep writing!
I think this is a good poem... good emotion, relatable, etc. The only problem with it I can think of is that you say "life" in the second to last line and then the very last line. I'm sure it was intended, but it sounds a bit repetitive. But maybe that's just me. Otherwise, it was good!
Keep writing!