The Dreamer
Last night I went to sleep, thinking,
“What will I be?”
This morning, I woke up, singing,
“Que Sera, Sera, whatever will be, will be, the future’s not mine to see…..”
I learned, in my Sunday school classes,
“The future is God’s to make”
But I learned, through life’s many bruises,
“What you don’t take time to make; failure won’t take time to take”
Yesterday, I dreamt in Technicolor,
About a big city, high rises, sky scrapers.
Today, I live in high definition New York,
What I am, what is real, all what I worked for?
Or what God blessed for me.
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Hey there, beeyaay!
We haven't spoken in such a long time, and I really wanted to review this, so here we go! 
xD
Just a though.
Firstly, I enjoyed your font-changing abilities, they added something else to the poem which made it sort of sound like a different voice each time, a different opinion, so congrats
Some little improvements too..
"Sky scrapers" is one word, but that's super easy to correct.
Also I think that you could think of a better word than "big" in the "big city" bit? Just to give some more description with one word, as cities are usually big.
Overall, great work, my friend!
-CFG
CFG!!!!!!! I missed you too and thank you for the review. Gosh!!!! i didn't see those mistakes, thanks for pointing them out. i would think of the word that might replace big, OK!
This is a pretty whimsical and light-hearted article in my opinion, but nonetheless, beautiful!
This is really beautiful, especially the use of Que Sera, Sera.This whole article has a very realistic but positive voice to it, is almost like a lyrical poem in some ways.
Well done! I enjoyed reading this poem!
-SubtleSanity
Thanks so much dear!
This a heart-warming short piece. I really liked it! You made it poetical, and it had a short story in it. Nice Job!
Thank you!
Hi beeyaay, Laure here to review! This article is spectacular, I love how you have written it! And I can't really find faults with this. I just really love it!
wow, well, thank you.......first comment of the new year! Do me a favor and check out my other literary woks, help to review and comment, please?
Sure, love to.