Hey, vivian!
Well, that's an awesome lyric. I loved the title cus it tells you just in one word what the lyric is about. It's a title that attracts you.
The beginning was great, too. The first line is awesome. I loved specially the third line, "An unbreakable link"..
However, the lines - "As friends we work together/ The team of the best kind" - I would reconstruct it a little bit. I mean, change some words and tell it in another way. Btw, you are the lyricist, it's all up to you how the lyrics will be. I just said what I thought..I had the same thought with the lines "We try our best/To be the best friends"
Anyway, I enjoyed the lyrics...hoping to read more!
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