Hey there.. Sharon here for a review.. So as you said, I interpreted it in my own way.. And I found love to be the main idea.. the title could have been a bit more specific.. since that is what appeals readers.. to me, I guess you have slightly deviated from your main track.. but then again, there sure are different ways of judging it.. in general, it's a good read.. the lost and torn part is a bit abrupt.. the simple descriptions are very neat.. it adds to the poem but again a it can be a bit long.. Thank You:)
P.S.: wish to read more of your works..
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