Only some things I thought of correcting if it is right:
I tried my level /good to the best/
To keep everything right and the bond alive
I tried my best to the/ best/
To keep my emotions at heart and strive
I had a confidence that our bond was /the/ best and no one /could/ come in between us
I always had faith in our bond as /the/ strongest
But the fire and steam of misunderstanding came in between
Hope it is as strong as I thought
I never want to have grudge against you
You left me without /a/ clue.
Now I am BROKEN
I don’t trust.
Over all the work is with feelings of sadness but it is really good also!
Good job.
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