This is my first (and more than likely - only) piece of poetry on here...
Goin' Nowhere
Light above,
Fire below,
Where d’yah think,
I’m gonna go?
Pee dot,
Ess dot,
Satan is a mo’ fo’.
Yes.
Now you know why I never write poetry 
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what's a mo' fo' ?
have a nice day
bluecows :-s
Haha, very short and amusing!
The pee dot ess dot made me smile...
I agree with Ms. (Mrs.?) Worms; get some more verses in theree and there could actually be something to this!
I like it all, it's really amusing. Not really deep or powerful, but entertaining!
--Q
Hey! Give yourself some credit. Add another six verses and you have a verifiable rap in the works.
Oh, don'tcha just hate it when you have to do creative writing for school. It's the worst. Especially length restrictions
it's...uhm....beautiful?
You should see some of my over attemps at poetry (I had to write 'em for school).
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This is probably my best ever piece
Yes, I can see why you normally don't write poetry. But this isn't terrible. It amused me.
Um. It is rather terrible.
But I love pee dot ess dot. It made me laugh.
i love that so much
I wrote this whilst wondering around the theme park on holiday. I'm still not sure what possessed me to post it up though
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Hee hee,
I see why too.
Good poem anyhow..