Young Writers Society

Me: uses google translate...
realizes you included a translation
...
*dies of the revelation of self dimness*

Hello my friend! I can't write reviews half as good as yours, but I'll try .

To start, I thought it's so cool that you are multi-lingual. I've always wanted to learn Spanish! Creating a poem in two different languages is muy bien (is that right? I don't know). The poem itself is so deep, I was treading water the whole way! This part:

Your eyes are my moon.

And who needs the earth when you are here?

You are my water and my bread

and I am full of you, you, always you.

Beautiful poetry, guys!

Love the imagery it creates, and the feeling that it all evokes; a sense of love for both the self and companions, at least as I understood it. Great job on the language aspect too, that's very cool.

My favorite part was this here:

when a flower dies, I do not cry

I become the petals in the wind.

Wow, it's such a lovely poem.

"You are beautiful like the moon,
who shines in my darkest nights."

After reading the first two lines I liked the poem. I totally agree with you, there is always a person who stands by you in your 'darkest nights' acting like your 'moon' giving you enough light to see and choose the right path.
This poem is a really awesome poem.

I really love the way you expressed your thoughts, feelings and emotion using such strong lines, each and every word in this poem is so powerful.
Keep it up.
Waiting for more.
Merci et bonne journee.