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Young Writers Society



Cynical World

by Lil_Pau


Cynical World

We stand in a withering field,
littered with our broken dreams.
The words that you speak
are blinded by the feeling of guilt.
The summer-blue skies fade away,
as our bones weaken in
the realm of
a cynical world.

The sun erodes away
at the corner of your eye.
Your limited days are spilled,
wasted upon your insolence.
A fate for a criminal
in this cynical world.

We sail on the same boat,
bound by eternal vows
that slowly crumble
our hearts to dust.
We'll drift endlessly
in this doubtful place,
Before the shards
of forgotten memories
tear us apart.

The liminality of nightmares,
it seems far away,
running away from us
towards the side of darkness.
And we'll be together,
to live and die
in this cynical world.


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Fri Apr 04, 2008 4:55 pm
blacktiger3915 says...



Nicely done. Keep writing! :D :wink:




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Fri Apr 04, 2008 4:48 am



Impressive. My only comment is that (in my oppinion) the lines
"Your limited days are spilled,
wasted upon your insolence."
sound a bit odd... but hey, that's just me. Good job.





I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom