I am here with your review. Nice seeing you trust our site with reviewing class-worthy titles by the way.
Here goes. I read this and quite enjoyed it but I did spot a few errors. What worried me mostly was when I pasted just the story part and it was 1 word or around there though.
The capital letters though are the largest most expressive words ever! It was almost as if you were really trying to convince me that this work was deleted and not meant to be reviewed anymore. Don't worry! I wasn't fooled by your sly tricks.
This deleted smells a little bit like Thailand and a rare type of flower- not sure how you managed that but it's a nice touch. Aah- ah - RA--fes--ia excuse me that sneeze was totally an accident from smelling the flowers. They smell kinda gross btw. But the flies like it so hey!
I really love your choice of brackets it makes the piece feel secretive, classified?
Anyway this is the best stinky general literary work named the same thing as it's first line that I have seen all day!
Keep writing!
This is gem sneaking away because he thinks he's funny!
Points: 33
Reviews: 105
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