Sex, Drugs, and Rock and Roll: Part Two

by JC

Published May 23, 2007

In Short Stories

California was not at all as I’d expected, nor hoped. It was like a dirtier Colorado. It had the same green street signs, the same yellow and white lines on the road, the only difference was the beach.

At the time I had never been to a beach. I used to have dreams, trying to imagine what they were like, and the moment the car was parked my heart began to race.

“Your first time at the beach, girls!” My dad said, mostly Sammy and Taylor, not so much to his gloomy eldest daughter, sulky from the move, and hormonal about her period. It disturbed me that my stepmother told him these things.

Despite my less than formidable mood, the beach managed to

lighten my spirits at least a little bit. I took off my shoes and stuffed my

socks into them. My first step in beach sand.

It was still warm from the day’s sun. Sammy and Taylor ran out

ahead with my dad trailing behind them. Jenna stepped up beside me.

“How do you like it?” she asked me.

“It’s alright,” I said.

“Alright?” I knew I’d hurt her pride. This was her hometown.

“It’s really pretty, I love the sand,” I said, cutting her some

slack. She smiled.

“There’s somebody I want you to meet. He’s the son of one of

my high school friends.

I tried to picture my stepmother in high school, with friends and

dates and proms. I couldn’t.

“Jenna,” I sighed.

“Callie,” she said.

“Can’t I at least adjust before you try to set me up?” I asked,

only half joking.

“You’ll like him,” she reassured, “how old are you?”

“Fifteen,” I answered.

“Oh, he’s a little old, but I trust you to make smart decisions.

Please Cal, give him a chance.”

Typical Jenna, talking to me like I was her best friend, living

vicariously through my high school years.

I grudgingly agreed. Jenna yelped in her joy. Thirty-six going on

sixteen.

“Come with me,” she said, pulling me by the hand, something

in me knew that I was about to meet the mystery guy.

“You two are going to have such a nice time! He’s taking you to

the pier, and then to dinner-”

“Jenna!” I interrupted, “you already had this all set up?”

She nodded excitedly. There was a figure sitting in the sand, we

made our way toward it, my heart beating faster despite my brains anger.

He looked our way, his green eyes meeting mine. I lost my

stride right then and there, falling face-first into the California sand. Jenna

laughed, the guy laughed, I dammed myself to hell.

“Callie, this is Patrick,” she said, “Patrick, Callie.”

I brushed the remaining sand out of my hair, I was still sitting

in the dirt and there was no doubt in my mind that my face was the same

color as my hair.

“Welcome to Cali, Callie.” Patrick said.

Smartass, I thought.

“Hi,” I said.

Jenna walked away, “I’ll pick you up here at ten, okay?”

How the hell had she talked my dad into ten? He was a

strict “be home by eight,” kinda guy.

“So, Callie,” Patrick began.

“What?” It came out harsher than I’d intended.

“Sorry,” he said.

“No, I am. It’s just…her. You know?”

“Yeah, she can be a bit pushy…”

“That’s one word for it,” I mumbled, Patrick laughed.

“Sorry if I seem…weird. I moved three days ago.” I said, as if it

were my excuse.

“How do you like it so far?”

“Don’t know yet…” I looked around, “It has it’s charm.”

“Oh, charm is one thing it definintely has,” I found myself

looking into Patrick’s eyes as he spoke, they were a mirror image of mine.

Only he had brown hair falling into them instead of red.

“Meaning…” I said with a smile.

“I’ll show you.”

:idea: Part Three- Drugs: Coming soon. :idea:

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Insomnia
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Insomnia wrote a review Review · May 25, 2007

This was good. :) It really flowed for me. I think there was just one thing I caught. And accidentally, at that lol.

He’s the son of one of my high school friends.

Missed your end speech marks there.

“Welcome to Cali, Callie.” Patrick said.

Just had to say, that made me snort. Sounds like the sort of thing one of my friends would come up with. xD

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Alainna
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Alainna wrote a review Review · May 24, 2007

:D Dialouge!!! YES!!!!

I liked this a lot. There is something missing though, I'm not sure what...maybe it's suspense or something. I'm not sure. But I'm positive that this will continue to go well!!!

Alainna
xxxxxx

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AndNeverAgainx3
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AndNeverAgainx3 commented Comment · May 24, 2007

me gusta mucho.
=]]
i like boy meets girl stories.
or whatever you wanna call em.

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M.B.Author
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M.B.Author wrote a review Review · May 24, 2007

OK, I liked this alot. It was as good as the first. No, even better then the first.

Now, I hate myself for pointing this out

I dammed myself to hell.

Man, I hate to say this, but you spelled *damned* wrong.

Well, other then that, you did great with this story. I really liked it. Keep on writing! Bye-bye.

-- M.B.Author

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JC
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JC commented Comment · May 24, 2007

Well, pretty fast I guess. Got kinda bored. Part three is up now...so...yeah....

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Royboy
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Royboy wrote a review Review · May 23, 2007

EEK! I hate that name, Patrick. Lol, I guess people really DO change your perception of characters... cute. I like it, despite the fact that the Patrick I know is a dumbass... It's shaping up to be different than everything else I've read, so I'll hand it to you there. I actually like it a lot! Now tell me how fast you're typing these, cause you're just posting them one after the other lol.

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Wiggy
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Wiggy commented Comment · May 23, 2007

I like it-more!



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