Author's Note: My summer is about to end, so I wrote this to both reflect on it, and wish it goodbye... Sigh... 
Summer
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I loved it! It was really creative! Really, really good job! There really isn't much to critique that others haven't so all I have to say is: WHAT A GREAT POEM! Loved it
I liked it. But be careful with the its versus it's! As EliteHusky pointed out, the "It's" in the second line of the third stanza should be "its." It's confusing, but the only time you ever use the apostrophe in "It's" is when you mean to say "it is." Even if you're using the possessive form, it's still "its."
I'd suggest changing "Swiftly" to "swiftly." I know it's a play on "Taylor Swift," but the capitalization in "Swiftly" is just distracting and doesn't flow right. I think people will get the reference even with just "swiftly."
The rhyming was pretty well done. It didn't sound forced, and it introduced a good, light mood to the poem.
Heei, I'm Demoness, here's a quick.. ehm, not review but something
Haha, aaow how sweet. A dedication to your summer! I liked it, it was a light and simple read! Have no nitpicks to come with so I'll just say! Eeeeh, NICE JOB
Good Luck & Keep Writing
// Demoness
Hey, I really liked this. You channeled your experiences quite well.
I thought this part was really clever because of the whole Taylor Swift thing.
In conclusion, I feel like I could have written this because I can relate to almost everything here, although there are obviously differences. Summer is coming to an end and school is around the corner, and we all dread it. Keep writing
Your memories will always stay with you, so make some nice ones so you can write some more nice poetry!
Correction: "it's" should be "its" as "it's" = it is.
Overall, I liked how you channelled your creativity to make this poem. As much as I believe school will be of use to anyone, I enjoyed the rhyming structure, especially when you rhymed home with Google Chrome. Very original, as this is the first time I have encountered a poem based on personal experiences so recently. Keep on writing as I could tell you put quite a bit of time in polishing this.
Sincerely,
Elitehusky