Hi, Ejay1806! This was sooooo sweet! If you haven't already, please show this to your mom. She would be ecstatic to receive something as touching as this.
-5kKitty
My Phenomenal Mother
I write this poem with a brimming heart,
and unfathomable amounts of love ,
coupled with a burning desire to chant,
about a woman as soft as a Dove .
Numerous things she has done for me,
but I haven't done enough .
She has been the best she could be,
else I would have had it tough .
When I was done and dusted,
she put me back on track ,
When life was getting me tested,
she handled it all with a knack ..
She has borne all my troubles,
She has shared all my tears,
She has forgiven my gravest fumbles,
and has forever included me in her prayers.
We have fought over silly things,
argued over many more,
but there is something magical in the joy she brings ,
that all the bickers go sliding through the door..
She has worked hard day and night,
She has been my greatest mentor,
She has had me forever in sight,
She is Amazing. She is my Mother.
She is the best , so eloquent ..
She is phenomenal , so versatile ..
She is purity at its best ,
radiating strength all the while..
I love her with all my might .
Thank you dear Lord , for sending an angel this bright ....
Hi, Ejay1806! This was sooooo sweet! If you haven't already, please show this to your mom. She would be ecstatic to receive something as touching as this.
-5kKitty
Sweeeeeeeeet! Seriously! 
I mean, hello there! I loveeed your poetry. It's so genuine! Have you showed it to mum? She must have been in that cry-laughing condition, I reckon, haha! Anyway, I could feel throughout your poetry, all your emotions, all that love. It's amazing!
Mothers are really important in our lives, aren't they? I know, they can be gross sometimes, and clingy but at the end of the day, they are just loving mothers. <3 On a personal level, I could relate to your poem awfully much.
Numerous things she has done for me,
but I haven't done enough
She has forgiven my gravest fumbles,
and has forever included me in her prayers.
We have fought over silly things,
argued over many more,
but there is something magical in the joy she brings
Good luck!Hey Ejay1806,
To begin with,i like how you describe little things about your mother.
As a child myself,it describe most of what i feel too.
"as soft as Dove" that is an interesting description u put for your mother. Right now i imagine you mother is a beautiful,soft and a kind person. I bet if a mother receive these kind of words from their child,they would be touched.
Overall, i love this piece and hope to read more from you!
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