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Hey! I saw the title of this poem and thought it sounded really good, so I came to read it. I think it conveys meaning well at the same time as being abstract, and abstract poetry is always good to read. I'm not sure exactly how I connect to this poem (I kinda see it as people being stuck to Earth, and not being able to explore - I don't know) but it's really good.
Well done!
Oh boy.
Another one of those one-line stanza freeverse poems. Please, don't use that kind of structure too much. It scatters relevant ideas and makes the poem harder to understand.
I don't know if it's just me, but I'm actually having a hard time reading this. Bear with me for a bit.
I'm not going to touch the meaning of the poem, or the supposed plot, since I don't really understand it. Maybe it's just me, maybe the way you present your plot is confusing.
However, this writing style is one that speaks of grandeur, and it resonates with the majesty of your poem. It actually makes me envious. Keep it up, anyway.
ah i see. i get your point but i just write it on how i view it in my mind so there are my thoughts, thanks for the review though :3
Hi! Recklessandwild here, leaving a quick review.
First, I really enjoyed this! I loved the language you used - it really contributed to the entire majestic-type feel I got from this entire poem. This is a piece I felt really peaceful after reading. Well done!
There's one part that confused me a bit. It might have just been a typo. On line five, you said
"A fog that stretches earths".
Did you mean to say "a fog that stretches the Earth"? It's not a big deal, I just wondered about it is all.
This poem is one that I am still deciphering the meaning of. I really enjoyed it. Good job, and keep on writing! I can't wait to see what else you come up with.
Regards, recklessandwild
Ah no thats not a typo, its supposed to symbolize how massive the fog is. IE: stretches earths- so its big. And thanks for the review :3