To Dream the Dream of Others (Music & Lyrics)

I hosted a Lyric Writing Contest, and Cat_910 took 1st place in it, so I was to write music to the lyrics she submitted. The lyrics are as follows:

To Dream the Dream of Others

by Cat_910

Mysteries of others

can seem so vast and strange.

Their feelings and their thoughts;

a charade that's due to change.

To understand who they are

is harder than it seems.

The only true way to do that

is to dream their dreams.

To dream others' dreams,

to know of their thoughts.

To understand their feelings

of misery and loss.

Of cheer and peace and happiness,

of a joy that truly gleams.

To understand a person

you must dream their dreams.

This is the url to the music. I am singing, and yes, I suck, so please you don't need to comment on that. ^_^ What I'm looking for in here is how well the music goes with the lyrics, and any adjustments you think I should make. Praise is good, but critiques make us better, you know.

Click here!

Happy listening everyone! Angel of Death's The Talking of Swans won 2nd place, and I will promptly begin writing her music.

-Jared